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Reviews for Despondency

By : HarlotOhara
  • From dominateMello on February 04, 2010
    This was pretty amazing, I love the voyuerism in it all and especially Luis. I hate Saddler for killing him I really do. My favorite pairing from 4 but if I were to cross any RE game and pair two guys together it would be me and Chris. I do love me some Sera though, don't get me wrong.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2009
    Glad to see someone else still writing RE4 fanfiction. And you've managed to make Ashley the envy of every Yaoi fangirl. Good job. Everything is so real, from the descriptions to the characters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2009
    Dude, this is an awesome fic. I really like how you make the scenery all nasty and grimy like it should be (i.e. as it is in the game) rather than figuring a way to stick Leon and Luis in a nice situation with a clean room or at least clean bedding. I also like how you describe all of the characters (Leon was in the most detail though) as being all dirtied up and scratch and bruised with torn up clothes and what not; it makes more sense that way because one doesn't go through a hellish experience like Resident Evil 4 and come out looking like a movie star. I guess what I'm trying to say is that it gives your fic a nice touch of realism.

    I also liked how you didn't make Leon or Luis, how shall I say this; "girly". You also didn't make it an overly lovey dovey situation yet still made it a nice sweet sex scene that didn't read like it was total porn and I felt it added to the characters. And I can't forget to mention that you really did an awesome job with Luis' personality; I can definitely see him as the gentle respectful lover type that really wants to make his lovers happy; kind of like Casanova, but in a good way.

    Finally, I am so glad that someone is still writing Leon/Luis fics even though RE5 is out.

    You did a really really awesome job with this and best of all it has a rather unique feel. Keep up the excellent work :)

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  • From ANON - Laetina on April 05, 2009
    Calling Luis Spaniard was hot.I loved the part about Ashley that was very amusing.To be honest just everything about this story was wonderful.
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