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Reviews for Soul Calibur: Alexandra

By : mogroxit
  • From JustS on October 07, 2012
    Was trying to re-read your excellent fic Mog but I've noticed the text has gone weird. Any chance you could fix it?
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  • From kanomikins on November 10, 2010
    Good story, I liked it! Maybe you will come back to it some day! :)

    I would try to avoid using all caps, even when they are excited - you need to express that excitement in words, not with a shift key. Like you did with this line: "A furious passion, finally unbound, had erupted with a smoldering and thunderous might that dwarfed Hephaestus’ mighty forge." That's actually well done, and a good use of Greek myth that totally fits the characters.

    And psh! I don't mind she kept her panties on the first chapter. He was a virgin, they're committing incest, hey sometimes leaving some clothes on is hot! First timers and virgins, very tasty story! :)
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  • From JustS on February 01, 2010
    Ignore the last part of my previous comment, I managed to miss the line about Lucius putting the crushed pills in a pitcher of water in an earlier scene. My bad!
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  • From JustS on January 24, 2010
    This is great so far. Who'd have thought anyone could make an awesome dry-humping scene?

    Sophitia's behaviour in chapter one is a bit weird though. She listens to Lucius' confession of getting off watching her and Cassandra bathe before asking him for a massage... and she doesn't think that'd be awkward for either of them?

    That's just something that irked me, otherwise, pretty flawless so far.
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  • From ANON - egot on December 16, 2009
    Dude, can't tell you how glad I am to see you're finally updating this one... definitely worth the wait. But please please post the next part (and the many, many chapters thereafter) much quicker.
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  • From ninesenshi on December 08, 2009
    Full on sex with no panties! Come on!
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - adun3 on December 06, 2009
    Even Cassandra wants to fuck Sophitia. She´s that hot.

    Awesome work, but I hope the next threesome scene doesn´t take eight months to write.
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  • From ANON - drax on July 08, 2009
    Definitely beyond what I would expect in a first story, your attention to craft and quality here is really impressive and hope you'll be continuing it soon. That said, I think you lose a little of the tension and slow build of the earlier scenes when you reach the point of consummation, to the point that I think the bathing scene is probably twice as the actual love scene. But this a minor concern compared to how strong this is as a first showing; you seriously can't update this soon enough. (A lot more Cassandra next time, right?)
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  • From ANON - Outlaw on July 05, 2009
    I liked this one alot, had a good solid story line. Would realy like to see you continue.
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  • From Xagzan on June 18, 2009
    Great stuff so far. I really hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - adun2 on June 15, 2009
    Great stuff man, are you updating anytime soon?
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  • From ninesenshi on April 08, 2009
    Pretty good stuff. Hoping for more (without panties).
    SailorNemesis
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