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Reviews for Walters Paradise

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From ANON - SLM on June 08, 2011
Really good fanfic, is there going to be a sequel? I'd definatly like to see vincent, james, and maybe crazy claudia!
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From Peaspuffi on May 19, 2010
This story is soo fucking disturbing that i love it, its kind of crazy to think dammed people do this stuff in afterlife but it is kinda of cool and hot
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From ANON - Zombiegirl2007 on March 09, 2010
Omg I love this story Angela and Harry are perfect couple I would love Walter toucher James
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From ScarletDarkness on September 07, 2009
I really enjoyed this story. Especially how you portrayed the characters. Omg, Harry and Alex just OWN. And whoa, Alex is kinky. It suits him.

I wouldn't mind seeing a different version of this plot. Like maybe all the villains of SH get together in their own mansion. >.> And then kidnapping their rivals and torturing them.
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From PyramidHead316 on July 13, 2009
I wouldn't mind seeing more of Alex and Elle. There isn't a lot of fic with them out there, because I think not a lot of people enjoyed Silent Hill: Homecoming. So Harry and Angela (and the others) can see any dead person that they want? Does that mean that Harry can see Cybil or his wife? It'd be interesting to see whether Mrs. Mason approved of Harry and Angela, and what situations they could get into. ;D A lot of possible emotions to play with there, and definitely some things to be said about the way he handled the Cheryl situation. I also wonder what would happen if Heather died and ended up there; would she be accepting of Angela?

Of course, some of those things would put a downer on the story. But you're right, there are definitely a lot of possibilities. I would love to see what you could do with Harry and Angela, seeing as how they would now be settling into a daily domestic life, even though it's in the afterlife. Or Alex and Elle. I'm also curious as to exactly where they are now. Are they in Heaven? Or is this Walter's dimension still, just a part of it that can be accessed by the dead?
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From Shoezies on July 10, 2009
Gahh..Harry is just so sweet...I know I've said it before, but seriously...And yay! Sequel!!
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From ANON - Shoe on July 07, 2009
Wow....This chapter went a lot smoother than I expected (I honestly thought Angela would really not go for this....) But Harry's such a frigging sweetheart! And, hell yes! I think a sequel is definitely in order! I personally think you could have a lot more fun with it, but that's just me! Great work!!!!
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From PyramidHead316 on July 07, 2009
Pretty good two chapters, with these last two updates. I can only speak for myself, but personally I'm wondering how much longer the story can go on. Walter's game seemed to be coming to an end, and indeed he just announced it at the end of this chapter. I'm wondering what his ultimate goal was, and what's going to happen to these characters now that they've fulfilled their purpose. None of them were really evil, so it was majorly unfair for them to be stuck in Hell. The only guess I have is that Walter was somehow trying to redeem himself for what he did, by helping these people purge their 'sins' and give themselves a second chance. But that doesn't fit with his goals in SH4. I'm also wondering what's happening outside this little reality he's created, namely with Heather. What's she doing while her dad is involved in this little game of switching partners?

I think a sequel depends on how you end it. I'd have to see the final chapter first, before deciding on whether I want a sequel, because obviously there are storyline details I'm missing here. I do wonder a lot how things would have gone if Alessa or Heather were involved in this (or both; with Alessa being an adult), though obviously that would have made for some awkward moments between Harry and the girl (whichever one he got stuck with). XD "Okay honey, just go there and have sex with the nice lady, while daddy stands here and watches." *snickers* (Yes, I have a SICK imagination. ;D)

(By the way, I'm Anthony from the previous review. I just wasn't logged in at the time. >_
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From ANON - Shoe on June 25, 2009
Wow....I can't believe that Alex has to do that....Good thing she's been practicing lol....I love this fiction!
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From PervyYaoiFancier on June 21, 2009
Indeed yay for dumbass! XD Oh, that man...maybe he should sneak some of that strawberry sauce out of the kitchen and cover Elle's side of the bed with it! Whoops! And hooray for lesbian sundaes! They are rather tasty ;) I am SO looking forward to Lisa and Walter FINALLY getting freaky! It's gonna be great! ^_^
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From PervyYaoiFancier on June 18, 2009
Those lucky bitches! Why does Walter have to be so scary cute? WHY?! I so want to play with that man's hair! That was a total "Awwww" chapter, now that everyone is getting more honest to themselves! YAY! Alex should just accept that his woman is a bondage queenand accomodate her! lol
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From PervyYaoiFancier on June 16, 2009
I go away for a few days, and what do I miss? Whippings and orgasms, that's what! lol Good times in both chapters! Yay for Alex FINALLY letting Elle know how he feels for her! Geez! And yay for Walter's ingenious plans...he makes me so damn happy! Why does he posture so much? He's friggin' sweetheart! Mental, a little insane, but he's a sweetheart! He was so good to Angela! Lisa just needs to corner Walter and have her way with him under the excuse of: Nurse Lisa needs to do a thorough exam...Yay!
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From ANON - Anthony on June 14, 2009
I'm really liking the story. I admit I was iffy about the game mechanism at first, and it still kind of rubs me the wrong way (because the image of Walter playing dice is just weird), but I'm liking seeing all the different characters interacting with each other in one story. There aren't enough stories like that around.

One of the things about Silent Hill is that it doesn't really leave much room for the different characters to interact with each other. With fandoms like Star Wars or other series (just using a favorite of mine as an example), there are plenty of useful situations where the different characters can all interact with each other. With Silent Hill, it really is such an isolated journey in the games, that it leaves few opportunities for protagonists from different games to interact with each other, and that makes it tough for fanfics. And of course, it makes it even tougher for smut! ;D So, it's great to see a story like this with the different characters participating here. Especially Lisa. There isn't enough Lisa smut around.

Although, it's rather disturbing to see Lisa developing a crush on Walter. There's something wrong with that girl. >_> (And I'm a huge Lisa fan!)

Plot wise, I empathize with Alex and Elle. Alex strikes me as he was in the game. He's got something going on for Elle, but he's afraid to say it. And he's oblivious to Elle's feelings, despite her hints. He's a blockhead, but it's still hard to see him suffer under the experiences Walter puts him through. I'm also starting to look kinder on Walter, which is rather disturbing, as I usually consider him to be evil embodied, despite having a tragic past. I do have to wonder how Walter thinks Harry can achieve his goal, because there's no way to do that except bringing Heather there. And bring Heather there is not an optimal situation, as much as I'd like to see it - I can imagine her horror when she finds out all the things that go on there. ;) Maybe he means he wants Harry to see these new people as family? I guess I'll find out.

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From PervyYaoiFancier on June 10, 2009
That was pretty hot.

I did have an "Aww how cute" moment when Walter felt that little pang of guilt! ^_^ He's getting human again! How sweet! And I also felt a serious rush of dread with the result of the dice roll. Pretty intense, if you ask me! I'm surprised Angela didn't completely spaz out! But she is getting more comfortable...Hmmm...I am still SO loving Harry! Mehbe he should literally smack emo-kid Alex upside the head, then lock him in a linen closet with Elle! That'd show him! XD
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From PervyYaoiFancier on June 07, 2009
Harry is just so damn awesome. Like, nothing fazes him to the point of freaking out. I love it! And now it is SO obvious everyone thinks Alex is an ass! XD I fell over laughing when Elle said :"Well he kinda deserved it!" and Angela agreed! Oh, BURN! Fabulous! I am so excited for the next chapter cuz I have a feeling Alex might just get riled up and do something about his infatuation with Elle, FINALLY! And I am totally looking ofrward to when Walter and Lisa finally get it on! Sexy fluff!
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