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Reviews for Mother Knows Best

By : salarta
  • From wingsofseyfert on July 18, 2010
    No pressure. You take your time, that's what makes a good story. Seriously, you are the ONLY person who writes Queen Zeal as sexy. I mean, as a kid I didn't think much of her except an enemy but when I played the game through last year, I thought, "I bet Queen Zeal has to be the biggest cougar in the entire kindgom and the only reason why everybody (including Schala and especially the Guru's) puts up with her shit is they want to have the off chance to get in her royal panties." I really almost didn't want to defeat her in the game but yeah, she is a very underused character despite the role she played in the game. So yeah, take your time, I'll be keeping an eye out for this one (anticipates a totally incest Magus/Schala/Zeal orgy while Flea watches and masturbates herself.)
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  • From salarta on July 17, 2010
    I don't know if you'll see this, I hope you do. Thanks wings! It's very rare I get any reviews from people for stories written more than a month or two ago, usually anyone that reads them past that point doesn't give anything. I'm not sure why everyone loves Magus/Lucca, that never made sense to me. Magus/Schala makes more sense since they're siblings and she seems to be the only person Magus still cares about. I'm glad you enjoyed my take on Queen Zeal, she's become my favorite female character (possibly favorite character as a whole) in the Chrono universe and it's kind of disappointing to me that there's almost nothing of her out there. She's perfect for just about anything.

    I do have plans in mind for future chapters, the problem is bringing myself back to this to continue it, a problem many other stories of mine share. I hope I bring myself back to this eventually, because I do want to get at least a few of those other ideas down in new chapters.
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  • From wingsofseyfert on July 16, 2010
    This story is hot, I'm going to tell you that right now. Everyone foams at the mouth with either Magus/Lucca or Magus/Schala. But a Schala/Zeal fic. I'm there! I'm glad that you casted Queen Zeal as a beautiful and sexy mature woman as opposed as some old witch that most stories depict her as. I can't wait to see what kind of goodies Zeal and Flea have in store for Schala. And when is Magus going to show up? If Flea's there, then Magus has to be nearby.
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  • From salarta on August 26, 2009
    Hey, thanks. I'd give a better response than that, but I'm on a roller coaster of feelings today that overall slump into depressed. I'm glad it gives you the drive to want to continue your work, so I very much enjoyed it, and I will try to get back to this not too long from now. I have a gift fic to write for a writing pal, as well as the Valkyria Chronicles ongoing to finish.
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  • From Shadowflare on August 26, 2009
    I've never reviewed anything on AFF, really. I feel somewhat obligated to do so here, though.

    First off, thanks for the mention. I'm glad something I wrote partly inspired some creative work rather than the usual... well, I won't go there. Overall, I have to say that pieces of writing like this not only reassure me that the F/F genre is still alive on this website, but also encourage me to step up the quality and quantity of my own creative output. I hope that this does the same for many others. I am glad that you made a decision regarding Flea's gender rather than attempting to keep things shady throughout, as it made it much more comfortable to read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter; the plot you're running here has a ton of potential in terms of creative direction, and I enjoy reading material that sets itself apart from the competition.

    Don't do as I do, and wait a decade before updating. ;) The good people of the CT section can get pretty insane with their emails and messages if starved for too long!
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  • From ANON - rb9 on August 20, 2009
    Got it, thanks. Yeah Flea's role aligned a lot with the femdom theme from the things I write. I haven't played SC or Suikoden much, but I did read a couple of your other ones... damn, it was late. And now I can't remember which ones. But I liked what I saw.
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  • From salarta on August 20, 2009
    Hey there, thanks for the reviews both of you! Though we've talked plenty on AIM and otherwise, Anonelbe. :P

    ricobanderas, it's great to know you liked this a lot. I saw and checked out your yahoo group around a year ago, and several times before that. Last year's check was for anything new of Rosa from FF4. The pictures were all stuff I had seen already, but there was one Rosa x Valvalis corruption fic that I liked. You haven't left any reviews for any other stories, but I hope you enjoy them.
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  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on August 20, 2009
    NICE! I really really like this story. I particularly like Flea's dominance, her wiles, and the inclusion of her kisses from the game (nice touch). Nice on making her a girl. Sorta :).

    Check out my yahoo group, if you like MC, femdom, corruption and the like... gonna check out your other fics now.
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  • From OmegaX on April 26, 2009
    Haha, you already know I loved this when you linked it to me earlier, and reading it once more just proves that!

    As stated, I cannot wait for any later chapters, furthering both Schala, and Zeal's corruption by Flea.

    Make sure to keep on me for both GODHAND: Carnal Dress, and the Chrono Trigger fic, so that we can bring a flood of perversity and straight (For the most part!) parings back into the yaoi infested worlds of AFF!
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