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Reviews for Perfectly Normal

By : sillyneko345
  • From GMB on July 20, 2010
    1. Are you gonna do a Light Jak / Daxter story that goes with this series?
    2. are you gonna do a story on how Daxter becomes Elf again?
    3. ARE you gonna update glitters story?
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  • From ANON - Csi Forsythe on October 08, 2009
    “Hey, no sweat. Can’t hurt me squeezin’ anyway. I’m bendy like that.” Indeed, Daxter, indeed.

    I'm actually amazed to be reading a one-shot! I knew it was coming, but it was weird not having to click a 'next chapter' button.

    Well, tally-ho! *scampers off to read the next story in your line*
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  • From senshixdoukeshi on September 24, 2009
    This story had serious wibble factor. I was a bit of a mess about it actually. Daxter's feelings are so poignant and completely understandable. I really love the way you portray them, it's quite good and I'm really thrilled that Daxter can hold his own. I look forward to the other stories your working on.
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  • From on July 21, 2009
    A good, solid sequel. I knew I would like this version better; Goddamn censorship XD. Very well written, though!
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  • From dexia on May 23, 2009
    Loved the story, as always I wish it were longer...

    Though I'm never content unless I get a 30 chapter story...

    But keep up the excellent work, can't wait for Sparkle & Shine...
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  • From Sione on May 21, 2009
    D’awww, wasn’t this just the most adorable thing ever! Your stories are always so heart warming and make me all warm and fuzzy inside. I loved it!

    I think Darkkie knows what Jak really wants, lol, that’s what I like about him. Jak is so controlled all the time but in his dark form he lets everything out. And Daxter gets a chance to receive what he wants, some rough loving. *giggles* X3

    Oh yeah Jak, I think the little tease is trying to start something. Haha, I loved that part! I can just imagine Jak looming over Daxter, and it gets to our redhead immediately! XD

    Thanks for this great chapter, and I must say the smuttier version was even better. :D Now I’m really looking forward to “Sparkle & Shine!”

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  • From TaintedEmerald on May 16, 2009
    Well worth the wait for the mature version. As I mentioned in my previous review, characterization is spot-on, fluff is warm and endearing, and it's a wonderful follow-up for Perfect Dark. I have to agree with Kaybrianna though, smut does improve it IMO.

    Anyways, I'm liking where this fic is headed, although I'm quite curious as to how a Light-Jak central fic will turn out.

    If it's you though, I can already guarantee that it'll be great.



    Also, you don't have to overdo it. I don't think your fans will mind which story you write next, so long as we do get more of your fluffy, lemony creations to enjoy.
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  • From Kaybrianna on May 15, 2009
    This was just as awesome as the less steamy version on FF.net!!! Though slighty better, because let's face it, smut makes everything better! I look forward to you future works!
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