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Reviews for All That Glitters

By : sillyneko345
  • From ANON - Anna on September 06, 2014
    Awesome story. There definitely needs to be a sequel to this.
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  • From on December 26, 2010
    lol i love this story and the last out take just made me laugh. i kind of sad for it to be done. but i still gald it end nicly. so keep up the good work oh and if you ever get the chance please write another fanfic for jak/dax their not alot (at least to me) that make me can't wait till the next instalment. and thank you for even writing this and putting it online
    singed:
    brittany b. peña
    p.s: since i just trun 18 this month i now have an accont on here so your my 1st review on this site so go you ^_^
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  • From Skunktail on December 18, 2010
    hoping for more :o epilogue?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on December 18, 2010
    As always, completely amazing. I have to say, that chapter was crazy amazing. And the bloopers were especially amusing. I accidently woke up my little sis reading them.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 17, 2010
    Hot sex, with a funny ending. A five-star combo in my opinion. X3 And with the sweetness of Dax wanting to kinda-sorta "redo" their first night together, that sends it up to ten stars. ^w^

    And, as always, there's the outtakes. XD lmao

    A great end to a great story. ^w^ When I usually read fanfics, the characters are so badly out-of-character I have to stop reading. I am SO glad I don't have to worry about that with you. XD Even when Dax was the mute "slave," his personality shone through every action, and I loved it. X3 Even Erol had an on-the-spot portrayl (the creepy, creepy bastard that I love to hate. X3)

    Anyway, great job. =3 I'm really looking forward to your next update, and I know it'll be worth the wait. ^w^
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  • From GMB on December 17, 2010
    *bows* You are the master of writing! Loved the story...hell i love all your writing....Hey can ya write a story for me?
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  • From ANON - Danielle on December 09, 2010
    I've just started playing Jak II: Renegade, and I was wondering if the character bases came from that game.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 23, 2010
    i have to admit, this has to be the best story i've come across in years. keep it up! waiting for the epilogue.

    PS, yes, Daxter, you would be a pretty girl.
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  • From ANON - Reva on November 20, 2010
    Ahhh finally, the "ending" .
    Really, really nice chapter...i had to read the kissing-in-front-of-everyone scene about three times ...soo cute :D Cant wait for the last part...

    And i would soooo love to see what they do about the child xD That little twisting surprised me. Its also great how well you caught Samos personality and acting about his little Keira :3

    As always you wrote something touching and interesting!

    Greetings from another one of your happy readers

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  • From TaintedEmerald on November 20, 2010
    Well, that was a neat way to wrap everything up. Loved Daxter's opening line this chapter, Jak as Dax's pet would be a nice turnaround. I was kinda surprised to see Tess dropped in there though, you really did a good job with the whole alternate universe theme.

    I'm kinda wondering about this prophesy now however...you could probably do a follow-up to this plotline in the future if you wanted to. I do like the current ending, especially with that apology kiss, and the epilogue to look forward to.


    Hope to hear more from you soon, you seem to really be on a role now.
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  • From GMB on November 19, 2010
    Gotta love those bluppers....hehe....Heck yeah, Jak & Dax are just too cute! Ya just don't wanna stop playin' with them....hehe...that can totally be taken out of context...oh well!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on November 18, 2010
    roflmao XD Well, that's that. Good thing there's going to be an epilogue, though, because more Jak & Dax lovin' is always welcome. ;3

    lol Almost everybody was so shocked to see them macking on each other. XD And it was so cute when Daxter thought Jak would be HIS pet. X3 I can only imagine Jak's face at the thought, and it makes me laugh. ^w^

    Anyway, until next time! =D
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  • From TaintedEmerald on November 11, 2010
    Very interesting plot development; I was kinda wondering where you were going to go from there. Nice to see that you're really getting into this story, even to the point where we get an extra chapter or two.

    I enjoyed the parlay situation, and the amount of background you added to Dax's character. I wonder what could be so important that they'd have to cooperate with the likes of Erol though? Guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to find out.


    This was a pretty nice break from your regular romance work (not that we don't enjoy that to death as well), and you've proven you can write action and adventure sequences very well too. Looking forward to the next segment (as always).
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on November 05, 2010
    Well, as glad as I am to see Damas getting put in his place by an Ottsel, I don't like how their appearance got those gears turning in Erol's head. XP Still, nice to hear that the Ottsels want to take Jak with them while Daxter's training resumes. X3 I don't think Damas is going to let him go without a fight, fated hero or not, but at least the duo can stick together. XD

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^w^ Damas' reaction alone would be worth the wait. XD
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 05, 2010
    lol, i loved the story, and, as always, the bloopers were awesome. the last one made me laugh out loud and my family looked at me like i was crazy. omg. i love you. *huggles teh author*
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