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Reviews for Golden Sun: Fires of Lust

By : OmegaX
  • From ANON - TheHidden on January 17, 2011
    Will you be having a chapter for what happened on the ship? Preferably without Kraden though.
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  • From ThePairingGuy on June 17, 2009
    Pretty nice start to the story. I'll be honest, there is one major flaw: It gets into the action much too fast. I think stories like this are more exciting and believable when there's a longer buildup.

    It definitely doesn't kill this story, though. Mia is very hot here, to say the least. All the action has a strong feel of spontaneity to it. Creative use of psynergy, too!

    The twist ending is great. Though I really hope that Felix, Piers, and Kraden didn't take any of that wine - the thought of any of them doing Sheba is just frightening! :)

    What does Sheba mean by "...Garet was so hung!" ?

    Anyway, good start, and I look forward to whatever the next chapter holds!
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  • From salarta on June 09, 2009
    You already know my thoughts, but putting them in a review for future viewing doesn't hurt!

    Any time where a woman cools herself off with something wet is a great thing, especially alcohol. Magic kink is always encouraged. This last one is a bit more of my own tastes seeping in, but toward the end I started thinking of one or both women keeping ice dildos inside them as they carry on with their lives, maybe even waking up the next morning to feel them inside. "How the HELL did that get in there?"
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  • From animekid on June 09, 2009
    .......

    is there another part to this?

    For some reason it has me wanting more...like there's more smutty goodness.

    Good but short...like sushi :3
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