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Reviews for You Don't Know Heaven

By : Nyarlathotep23
  • From jeazard on January 14, 2011
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    That was beautiful. Absolutely and stunningly beautiful.
    You chose an unusual perspective for your narration ("you"), but you also made it work! *thumbs up*
    You really had me look into Apollo's head and make me *feel* like I was right there with him.
    Also: hot as hell! XD

    Great story!
    ~jea
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  • From ANON - I_Want_Vassalord on January 22, 2010
    Oh...my...goodness...

    Please write one with Phoenix and Miles! This was unbelievably sexy!

    I swear my room combusted into flames!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2009
    That was seriously hot! I don't even know that game, but I still totally enjoyed the story. First time stories are my guilty pleasure, and it was written perfectly in your fic - the whole wonder and surprise at liking something one didn't even suspect one would like, and the whole slow realisation of the fact that one does indeed like men... And the sex was really sexy! I can't say anything about characterisation, since I don't actually know the characters, but the way you wrote them made me want to give that game a try :D Great story, thanks for writing!
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