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Reviews for Parallax

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2013
    I laughed out loud for real at this chapter. You have me hooked! I should be sleeping right now.... -_-
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  • From ANON - John on March 29, 2012
    At first when i was reading this story there was no sex in it, but i was fine the story was fun to read, i chuckled a lot with there actions... then near the end ahhh nice and hot good work.
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  • From ANON - Lily on July 05, 2011
    Wow! I just finished reading your fic up to it's current chap - great job, I love how you used the side missions as the storyline. Also your Shep/Kaidan? Hotter than he'll! :)
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  • From Nightodie on April 11, 2011
    Yay Fort!!! I am so glad you updated!!!! Thank you. I love this!!!
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  • From ANON - Siha Shap on November 22, 2010
    Absolutely bloody brilliant. Found my way here from FF via your profile. Adore your Shepherd. so funny. Have just read the whole thing in one go (meals and getting dressed being left by the waside). Need to get lunch. Please continue the good work!!

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  • From ANON - mae on October 08, 2010
    I really love your story so far. Poor Kaidan, I feel sorry for him but at the same time I cna't help but laugh at his misadventure. I will keep reading your stories. You are an amazing writter :)
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  • From ANON - Chelsea/Joisan on October 04, 2010
    Despite this chapter not being as racy as some of the previous ones, I loved it. Particularly enjoyed your take on Dr. Saleon and what he was attempting to do. And LOL @ the panties!
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  • From ANON - Kahri Avalon on September 28, 2010
    oh so good. i've been meaning to sit down and read all of this for ages. now i'm all hot and bothered... thank you for performing this service for all by writing this... can't wait for more (harder, deeper, etc.)
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  • From Nightodie on September 28, 2010
    Oh Fort this was really interesting ... I don't know how you came up with that thought but it was really good. Worth the wait (although I admit I didn't want to wait and still don't. I want more. I loved it.

    Thank you!!!
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  • From ANON - stefan on September 27, 2010
    fantastic. well written love story that meshes well with the mass effect universe. realistic likeable characters and interesting/humorous situations make for a great read. each love scene is so vivid and well described! also since it isnt just gratuitous sex every few pages it makes each love scene even more meaningful. great job! i just hope you finish it sometime? PLZ?!
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  • From ANON - Kerri on July 26, 2010
    I love Parrallax!
    I accidentally stumbled upon it, and now I can't wait to read the ending!
    Shenko FTW!
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  • From ANON - Michelle167 on July 10, 2010
    Nice chapter Fort...found myself wishing that they had made Shepard engaged in the game.
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  • From ANON - Aslanasadi on June 25, 2010
    Hi Fort,
    I finally made it und finished reading Parallax. You´re writing with so much esprit. I laughed so bad at times, that my husband thaught I took some pills *giggles* and I endjoyed the erotic part. Huh, I wish my english would be better to describe it... Anyway keep on writing... See you in the Kaidan Alenko Support Thread :-)
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  • From ANON - Danni on June 18, 2010
    omg I love this story!
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  • From Nightodie on June 18, 2010
    Aaahh my dear Fort- it was worth the wait- I love this story!!!

    Thank you!!!!!!
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