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Reviews for Alternate Truth

By : salarta
  • From wingsofseyfert on August 23, 2010
    Pretty sweet. Love the fact that Arakune is getting some love here, I mean, sure he's some slimy thing that absorbs people and stuff but still, he's got to have some every once in a while, right? Disturbing as hell for sure and embarrassing since Noel masturbated in front of a crowd (wish I could have been there) but still, really neat and original. I always thought that the Lei fei chick (whatever her name is) was always hot. Her assistant is so lucky (You can lick mine if it makes you feel better), I would definitely apply for residency in her clinic!




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  • From ANON - Ice Burn on October 14, 2009
    My, my Raltese, you are becoming a true deviant. Drugging? Bribery? A doctor MOLESTING her patient? Where will it end? No where soon, I hope. Well, time to get to tacks.
    This chapter was definitely more your speed and comfort range, as compared to the last one (lol). Tender yuri with heavy in character writing. It didn't end the way I expected, seeing as I was expecting Litchi to adopt I-no's attitude as well as her outfit, and commence in some hot dom/sub action with surgical precision (get it? Doctor, surgical precision? I'm tired as balls and I have swine flu, sue me. Actually I don't know if it's h1n1, I'm sick, feels like flu caught it from my friends sister, damnably precocious brat rambling now). However, as you went along, you sorta forgot about the assistant, it felt, or couldn't decide how to fold her into the story without diminishing the Litchi/Noel part in turn.
    It read like you were trying to get back to bread and butter after the last chapter's notable shift in your writing habit, but I think this story may have suffered because of it. It could of turned into a white hot 3way, but then, my tastes (if you haven't realized) are a little more debauched than most, methinks. I still want a Rachel story, loli or no. Goth loli girls do good things to my p0n0s.
    I haven't read any of the next story yet, gonna sleep now, but the Kokonoe cosplay actually took me a bit to realize (denser than depleted uranium). The introduction of Tager immediately made me think of HOT SOVIET-STYLE SEXINGS, but I don't think that's gonna happen. Not you. Not yet.
    Also, TAGER IS NUCLEAR, NOT STEAMPUNK. I think.
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  • From ANON - Ice Burn on September 29, 2009
    Well, Raltese, you were right, this story is pretty off kilter (for you).
    You even earned an audible lolwut when I got to the line "ticklish vagina". And BEEES. Needed more bees.
    Now the srs part: this story serves it's purpose as a creature rape and exhibitionism/humiliation vehicle, and accomplishes that well enough. The story as a whole, however, was pretty sparse on the erotic content, detracting from the overall feel it could of had. I got the feeling you were...... holding back? Like you were planning to take it somewhere big, but decided to back off. We'll see where it goes, I guess.
    I'll review each chapter as I view them, so sit tight.
    And there had better be PANDA in the next chapter, or I'll be disappoint.
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  • From animekid on September 14, 2009
    Is there more?

    I am wondering what the hell are the other chapters about! I have an idea who else might be in the other parts....Damn I wanted some JinxNoel rapez and stuffz XD

    still it didn't make me go squick (only snuff and scat does that,) and it wasn't bad as I thought...but pretty good.
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  • From salarta on September 12, 2009
    The second chapter is planned to swing back the direct opposite in terms of what most people would consider desirable and conventional in a fic. I saw you in the reviews of a different Blazblue fic and wondered if this one might catch your interest too. Taokaka is an amusing character, but she seems extremely overhyped by the fanbase to me and doesn't really interest me as a character to write with. I hope you read the future chapters, as I think at least the planned second one will be to your (and most readers') liking.
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  • From ninesenshi on September 12, 2009
    Fun, though not as sexy as your stuff usually is. Still, it's cool how you like alot of the same games that I do. If you are doing more BlazBlue I would really like to see Tao Kaka rape the hell out of Ms Lichi. Since Tao's race is engineered she might well be a funatari. It would also be great to have her milking Lichi given her fascination with food and Lichi's breasts. Well, hope to see more.
    SailorNemesis
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