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Reviews for First Knight

By : Badpie24
  • From leanimarie210 on June 05, 2010
    So I just found this story, read all three chapters and now I'm wondering when you're going to update! I love Female Noble/Alistair stories! This is my new favorite story :) Hope to read more!
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  • From Kabraxal on March 02, 2010
    Wonderfully sweet story. The intimacy and light banter between the two was touching and really played well. You seemed to have Alistair perfectly captured... it actually felt like this was in game. Wish the scene was in the game. It was beautiful and it was a tribute to the romance. Thank you.
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  • From Dvorchak on January 20, 2010
    Awesome!! I love how you manage to capture Alistair's naive charm, and his adorable awkwardness!
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  • From brainfear on December 11, 2009
    Woah Nelly, that was an intense 3 chapters!
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  • From fortunesque on November 23, 2009
    I told myself that I'd read this after I got DA:O. It was a good plan :)

    Your writing is lovely as always. Now you need to put some Mass Effect on this site to further enrich the community of naughties :P
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  • From kongxing on November 21, 2009
    Nice story... though it could use more breathing room between sex scenes, it's nice. Alistair is fun to write, I imagine, though I would find the task of putting him to 'work' daunting – he doesn't appear to be too dexterous.

    Good job, hopefully you'll write more 'colorful' works in the future.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2009
    By far the best Dragon Age smut story on this site yet. I'd love to see more stories from you,
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  • From ANON - Cytherae on November 20, 2009
    Wow, Badpie, and this was just their firs night then?

    *fans herself*
    Can we hope for...mm...more knights? ;)
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  • From jadedragon83 on November 17, 2009
    Personally, I enjoyed this little fic. It was very true to the game scenes, in both dialog and the general feel of the "sex" during gameplay. I remember thinking how wonderfully romantic it all was, and how sweet he was when trying to be charming and fumbling his way through XD Alistair has got such a huge grip on me right now, it's a shame there aren't more stories with him on the site!
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  • From Lynna on November 13, 2009
    Not too bad. Although it was a a tiny bit too cheesy for my liking, and I have to admit that I skipped quite quickly to the end, sorry. The romance parts of DAO were ridiculous and just too unnatural and made me cringe more often than not. Focussing on smut between Alistair and the PC in your fic would be more fun to read than trying to turn an obviously adult game into a sickly sweet romance. D8 (Just too bad that he's straight or he would be more interesting.)
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  • From ANON - Sammi on November 13, 2009
    Ayeeee! that was such a nice read!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2009
    no not alistar its leliana
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