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Reviews for Only By A Few Seconds

By : fortunesque
  • From ANON - Estefa on February 13, 2013
    I just wanted you to know that I thought this story was fabulous! Its the only one of its kind that I've found so far; it made me laugh out loud several times and cringe once (yeah, you know the spot). Thanks for the fun read, and I hope you pick it back up sometime!
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  • From recycledissue on November 02, 2010
    LOL okay, I've only played Mass Effect once, but I love your writing style and your pacing.
    And, really, since I only have a general idea of what the game and the characters are about, believe me when I say you're an amazing writer. LOL

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  • From ANON - Tracie on April 29, 2010
    I laughed so hard when I read "hookers and blow!" It had me laughing all last night and snickering all day today. I had to come back and say thank you. This whole thing is absurdly humorous. I think now I'll go read all of this again. Keep up the good work!
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  • From BloodyA on February 10, 2010
    I love this! There's nothing like a good bromance and I think that Alenko and Shepard could definitely have a bromance of legendary proportions. XD

    Also: Oh Dear Baby Jesus. Imagining what Ash will say when Liara comes to her with this 'beej' problem will be, well, it will be interesting to say the least. lol
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy! on January 09, 2010
    Very entertaining. At first I wasn't very into it since Shepard seems to be quite OOC. But I guess that's because I played mine either very Paragon-y or extremely Renegade-y. The comedy works well too but I'd cut down on the sex jokes. It gets pretty tiring after a while. There are other types of jokes, you know. =D I guess, the main thing that pulls me is the Bromance. Not many Bromance in fiction, I just realized.

    But again, this is AFF. So: Liara Threesome? Nyum!

    8.5/10
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  • From SnarfSnarf on December 30, 2009
    Pretty enjoyable read so far. Dialogue doesn't feel entirely natural in some parts, but since you're writing for humor it makes sense. I also like how certain elements from the game are worked in (randomly hitting buttons on the mining laser, for example).
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2009
    ... I'm sorry, I can't laugh any more. I would pity Shepard and Alenko, but they, frankly, deserve it. Also, clueless, innocent Liara is adorable, though I'm surprised that the two of them haven't commented on our favorite space gypsy jailbait yet.
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  • From Uilleand on December 24, 2009
    OMFG I'm dying here...
    "Diiiiibs"....
    *Ded*
    Loving the bromance. But loving that you haven't turned Ash into some weird 'cuz that's the way women are' parody. She's still a tough-ass soldier.
    Looking forward to more of this...

    oh...also...Ball sweat? *SNORT* Love!
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  • From ANON - SS on December 23, 2009
    Ok, Jesus, we get it, it's not M/M. Christ.
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