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Reviews for Brotherly Love

By : RyuheiAoi
  • From fantome1 on January 15, 2011
    Brilliant. Also, personally I'd pick Mia. I'd have Mist and Ike stay together, without Mia for the ending though, just the two of them.

    Five stars.
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  • From MayorHaggar on December 29, 2009
    Nice beginning. You mentioned Mia and Marcia, and I agree that the two of them are the best choices for the unnamed young voyeur. Not sure whether you're going to have this third character blackmail her way into the fun, or have her go about it in a less devious manner. Either way, I'll be reading.
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  • From 2FD2 on December 27, 2009
    Shameless smut, and as such I approve of it wholeheartedly. Good work.
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  • From karlminion on December 16, 2009
    Not sure about the young girl for next time, but...

    In the future, throw in Lethe. Or Titania; redheads are hot!
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  • From megadeth425 on December 16, 2009
    I'm a big fan of Ike/Mist, and just Mist in general, and I approve. Drawing out the smut part may not be a bad idea, but it's pretty damn good as is. I'm partial to Mia as a potential love interest, but there's so little of Marcia out there that it may freshen things up.
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  • From daveb on December 16, 2009
    Amazing, but add more detail to the smut.

    I think you should leave it at Ike/Mist (with different positions, and anal), with Marcia secretly watching them.
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