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By : littleolmee
  • From Kiteria on July 03, 2012
    Okay, that was good. I liked the details in it, though I wonder why she wasn't embarrassed to see him naked. Glad to see someone can actually write a story on here, not just a full blown sex scene. Means I might be able to write a few stories of my own. But back to your story. I liked how you described the relationship between Witch and Wizard. I've read a couple stories before and all of them....well I won't say sucked, but none were as good as yours. Update soon, I really liked this.
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  • From ANON - Iffi on May 11, 2012
    I really like your story. The wizard is just cute. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Darkmystic on August 21, 2011
    Keeping working on this story, so far its pretty good. ^^
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on April 04, 2010
    I'm very intrigued to see as to how you're going to show her getting all the gifts from everyone. You've done a fantastic job on keeping the characters believable, their dialog and actions within character, and on keeping the plot line from straying to far. I really do hope to see some more soon. This story is very well written and is a joy to read. It's definitely a wonderful change of pace from the stuff I normally sift through. Don't stop and please post soon. I really can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Cyndy on March 03, 2010
    I read Chapter 19 and 20 and it's still amazing as usual. I can't wait for another update :D
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  • From ANON - Fei Yang on February 28, 2010
    I've been reading your story since chapter one and I've now finished 20. it's absolutely great and you portray the Wizard perfectly. I can't wait for another update :D
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  • From ANON - Cyndy on February 27, 2010
    I'm looking forward to the second update. Your writing skills are wonderful and this is one of the greatest stories I have read. Please please update soon, I'm dying of anticipation!
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  • From ANON - Cyndy on February 24, 2010
    This was an excellent fanfic and I hope you update more soon!
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on February 16, 2010
    Nice way to put it to the Witch. I would have liked to have seen just a little more for this chapter for dialog and reaction. This one felt just a little rushed, but still funny to read how Hikari and Finn put it to her. Keep up the good work hun. I hope to see some more soon!
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  • From ANON - theredangel on February 14, 2010
    I really, really like this story. ^_^ Very nice! Please keep going~
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on February 11, 2010
    Awhh....How long is Wizard's punishment going to be, I wonder. I can't help but to be curious about all the things that Witch might let Hikari in on now. Did she make up her mind, by the way? I can't wait to see some serious fluffiness fly soon! I'm really enjoying your story and you're doing a great job on keeping the characters believable. I can't wait for the next chapter! Good work hunny! I might be doing some artwork for ya soon if you keep it up!
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on February 06, 2010
    O_O....Wow...Awesomely done, deary. Please oh please post a new chapter soon! I can't wait to read what's next! GAH! I hope Wizard's going to be alright!
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on January 30, 2010
    That was definitely worth the wait. I love how you made Wizard's trip to the astral plane. And how the spirits wanted to play with him upon his arrival was certainly cute....It's hard to imagine him playing in that sense though. I hope you post again soon! That wait was near torture. Lol. Good job and keep up the great work hun!
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on January 20, 2010
    Gah! Poor Hikari! poor Wizard! Please tell me that you'll be setting everything to rights soon! I would like to see some more fluff from those two!
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  • From ANON - GillGirl86 on January 19, 2010
    please please please update soon! I've been watching this story and can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm hanging in suspense here...I need more!
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