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Reviews for REFLECTIONS OF REGRET

By : KitWriter
  • From ANON - Mmorex on October 26, 2015
    Came for the porn, stayed for the story. I love it when that happens. This has been an interesting journey, mostly in following Krystal's development over time (though I still think the 'Kursed' thing was a little off). But I've been really enjoying seeing Fox and Krystal interact since they made up. I would have thought that she would have conceived back on Cape Claw, but I'm glad to be wrong about that. I'll admit to having a thing about that, and I look forward to it, as well as to how the team handles Andross.

    I hope to see you finish this work and I think I'll have a look at some of your original works as well. Though might I suggest that for convenience sake, you add your fanfics to your website as well?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2014
    You are a fantastic writer...but good lord, I hate Command Mission and as if that game Krystal. Your story is awesome and you are a fantastic writer, so don't get me wrong...I just never agreed with Command's portrayal of Krystal and this ending in particular. It made her seem so wishy washy and just well, a bitch considering everything Fox is made to put up with attitude wise from her. Not to mention joining the rival team AND dating Panther of all people, just to get Fox back? Petty, bitchy, and OOC from Adventure/Assualt.

    Nothing, again, wrong with your story and Krystal isn't your fault. Excellent job honestly! You write beautifully! I just hate her so much from this friggin game and you reminded me why...XD
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  • From ANON - carleton missaglias on August 08, 2010
    (this message is from a group of peoples opinions). We have all agreed that the story is EPIC. and wanted to request something, and would appreciate the consideration. If you were to post a FULL story on fox and krystal, all about them, and mainly romantic, so as to not have to grunt when we missed the marrige, irth, ect. just, starting from the day they met, and going on for maybe 30 chapetrs? lol. we know thats a dipshiitters request, but youre a great writer, and we think that a full non killing, (or not) story on fox and krystal would be nice, and get LOTS of good reviews. please make an abriged and unabriged version, because pr0n is good too, and it would be nice to haave someone curse someone out for better detail on arguments, instead of substituting with lame words, like crap, even if its not allowed....ah, well. who cares, you gottaa life, we gotta life, so....yeah. If by some miracle you think about it, PLEASE reply to us so we can better explain. lol. (*-*)
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  • From ANON - paintballadict9 on May 25, 2010
    dude...gory....lol

    very well done chapter...always love your work :)

    ~paint
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  • From TheSkull on March 30, 2010
    Not terribly surprised.
    I actually read the original comics when they were released. I've actually still got those issues of Nintendo Power...Hmmm...wonder if they're worth anything. Probably not. Anyhow, i will give you credit on two points.
    This is still a really good story...
    And Not many ever bother on putting Shears into their stories...

    All in all nice going... ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chris Young on March 17, 2010
    Hey there, decided to be brave and take the jump into the next unabridged chappy of RoR, and boy I wasn't disappointed! You sir, are pretty darn good at writing eroticism, and that is difficult to do well! Never tackled it seriously myself, but I'm given to understand it's almost as hard as writing legitimately funny comedy.

    Specifically, I think you succeeded at your goal of differentiating the two "versions" of the couple's lovemaking. The first one seems more like what you'd get in an R-rated romance, character centered, plenty of emotion, everybody satisfied and some comedy at the end to lighten the mood and relieve audience tension.

    The second scene is more like an erotic romance novel. More graphic (You used some euphemisms I've never heard before, which is weird, because I live around very perverted people at school...) and animalistic, but definitely nailed the passion those two have for each other. Personally, I preferred the second one, mostly because I like more description in ALL my own writing.

    My only nitpick would be with the last part of the scene, with Krystal's unintentional telepathic intrustion giving them both one last climax. I think that part could probably have been safely moved to the "tamer" first scene of the chapter without really altering anything else except the setting. It felt to me like something that would befit more of the romantic, true-love-lovemaking type thing, similar to what you did in R o' Marcus with him and Fara; (which, btw, we totally need an "unabridged" version of. Consider it requested!)

    I'll do a re-read and e-mail you if I think of anything else to comment on...Oh, and as for the..."constraints" of this particular story, I've already said you do erotic fiction VERY well, and I, at least, would definitely be interested to see your take on a group sex scene XD

    I only ever attempted to write one once, and it was for humor, so it didn't really turn out well. You have a knack not only for characterization (and keeping folks in character LOL) but for things that are HOT! As for who would be involved...well, you've already got several universes you write in. I'm sure you could pop out an A/U story somewhere...;)

    OK, /pervert!
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  • From ANON - paintballadict9 on March 16, 2010
    umm...wow...

    i think imna stick with the FF dot net stories from now on.....


    these stories arent really my style...


    0.o
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  • From TheSkull on March 12, 2010
    You know? I have to honestly admit that even though i don't read or write these things very often. This story had an impressive tone and storyline to it. I actually liked it. You know it's a good story when you can erase all the sex scenes and still have a solid story. Most people only write these things to get down to the dirty stuff, but, you managed to keep interest a bit more than just deviant sexual plot.
    Like your last reviewer i agree that this story hasn't gotten the attention it truly deserves. I would say that if you don't have a Fanfiction.net account that you make one. Perhaps the SF community there would better receive this, and even if not it would definately get more viewers...

    On either note...... ^_^ Great story...keep it up, Kay?

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  • From ANON - FraGmenTd on March 10, 2010
    Wow... one review? I mean, I'm not a member of this site, and I don't leave reviews very often... but wow... this story has not gotten anything close to the love it deserves. Neither has your FA page...

    So I'll try to sum it all up in a nutshell. Kickass story, man. Well written, well put together. I HATED the multiple ending crap they pulled in SFC, and you tied like, all of them together in a believable way. Hat's off to you, sir. Also, +100 gamerscore for the Star Trek reference, and +50 for the Dennis Leary reference (reduced only because it wasn't verbatim... I'm picky). I rofl'd when I read both of those.

    Also - and this is going back a bit - I really liked the interactions with Fox and Falco earlier in the story. Falco coming in to bail Fox's drunk ass out... classic bromance right there. I also really liked Krystal and Fox's internal struggles. The textbook definition of character development, imo.

    I absolutely can't fathom why this story hasn't gotten that much attention, even if it is on AFF. So tomorrow, I'mma roll on over to your FF.net page and unleash squealing temporal doom - er, I mean read and review - whatever more text-based goodness you've got going over there. +50 more gamerscore if you catch the above reference. I'll prolly leave a shout for you on FA, too.

    Definitely looking forward to the conclusion of this tale. Mayhaps we get to see Krystal preggers? *is hopeful*
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  • From ANON - daos3 on March 08, 2010
    I usually do not review fiction on this site, mainly out of laziness, but I felt a need to on this one. I judge how good a fiction is by how often I check to see if it has been updated. This one I check at an obsessive rate (yeah I know... it's sad). All kidding aside, this is greatness on all levels. bravo! (checks again to see if it has been updated.... damn!!) :)
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