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Reviews for Where You Belong

By : anniechan
  • From ANON - crazycatlady on April 16, 2011
    Hey there. I've read Fallen Angel and I thought it was good,though fast getting to the... climax? I don't want to sound offensive because I really liked it, but I guess the right thing to say would be that it's too "obvious", which is what you mean by amateurish right? Regardless, I have high hopes for this fic! I'm really glad this is more realistic, and also very titillating!I'm not quite sure how this is going to end, but that makes it all the more agreeable. Especially since this includes F/M AND M/M (which is really exciting by the way...).
    Anyway, I'm sure it's going to wrench my heart with agony when I have to read about poor Joachim's suffering, but I can't wait for the bittersweet feeling ;). Keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2010
    I really like this story so far. I noticed you haven't updated it for months but I hope you will continue with it. It would be really interesting to see where this story goes. Unfortunately, it is rare to read plausible stories about who Joachim was before he was turned into a vampire. The fact he is married with children makes it seem more believable, especially considering the time period and the pressure to continue the family name.

    Overall, an interesting start and I hope you will update again sometime soon. :)
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  • From HappyDragon on February 23, 2010
    I wouldn't mind seeing more of this. . . .

    And it's a much smoother read than your first work--which, might I add, is a far cry better than some of the stories I've seen on other sites. @_@;; Really, there are worse things you could have written.

    You have talent. Give it another chapter or two, and you should have enough story down for a solid--and meaningful--critique.

    I'll keep watching for this. . .

    Good Luck!
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