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Reviews for Picking Up the Pieces

By : gingermaya
  • From ANON - Tatl on April 22, 2012
    Please finish this! I love your style of writing and I'm anxious to see how this story ends!
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  • From ANON - 9 on April 12, 2012
    why don't you keep on? this is torture! i'm crying...TT_TT
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  • From ANON - braxy29 on November 27, 2011
    i really hope you come back to finish this one! very interesting, different, and i am most curious about where you could go with it!
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  • From ANON - Nayela on August 09, 2011
    This is a really neat story! I like how you're allowing for character development instead of rushing Thane's emotional progression towards stableness. It gives the story more credibility and I think it helps the reader to get a grasp of what Thane went through. He's obviously still wary of all this treatment because all he's come to learn is to fear. I think a lot of writers (myself included!) would have Thane be a reactionary and act like we know him to be in Mass Effect 2. Case in point, love character development and plot progression.

    Like the previous reviewers, I do hope you continue this story. Your writing style is good and I really enjoy the story line you are setting up. Hopefully with ME3 coming up, you'll have a change in heart?
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  • From ChildXylia on June 27, 2011
    This story is so intriguing. :O I hope you continue with it!
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  • From mancer on February 14, 2011
    Just finished rereading Picking up the Pieces. At first I was a little skeptical over such a change in the story, but it's certainly grown on me! I love the dichotomy that you've developed in Thane's personality. And the way Shepard finds herself attracted to the submissive signals/postures, while berating herself for finding the same postures hot since they were beaten into him. Even the way you've had the Batarian's turn his memories against him! Quite a lovely piece of work!

    I know its difficult to get back into a story after so long of not updating it, but I can't help but throw my chip into the hat with the rest of your fans. We eagerly await the rest of your story! =)
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  • From BlackMetalHeart on November 30, 2010
    If you are never going to finish this story please email me and tell me. I don't want to keep checking if your never going to update:(
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  • From BlackMetalHeart on September 23, 2010
    When are you going to update?!
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  • From BlackMetalHeart on September 18, 2010
    You really need to update soon!
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  • From ANON - gambit56 on May 12, 2010
    Aww, man! Not cool to leave us hanging! I've been hoping for some new chapters; any chance of an update? This story has a lot of promise!
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  • From brainfear on April 29, 2010
    Love this!!! Please post more soon!!

    ch3
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  • From ANON - simplychaos on March 24, 2010
    Great second chapter! Very good to see! I love how Shepard handled the situation, I was hoping it wouldn’t be we can’t tell you anything to compromise the mission and he will never know what were really doing kind of thing, haha. The drell memory is a nice touch too (well not so much for him)... great can’t wait for more!
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  • From ANON - simplychaos on March 18, 2010
    Wow this story has defiantly peaked my interest. I hope he becomes involved in the taking down of the pirates rather than the helpless victim, but seeing as how he took on Shepard id say he’s not helpless. I’d also like to see how his son and wife fit into the picture. Anyway I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter

    Good luck with my favourite character

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  • From ANON - lyssalu on March 17, 2010
    i love this. you're such a brilliant writer. :)

    i can't wait for the next update.
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