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Reviews for Milk & Honey - Legend of Zelda

By : juneauej
  • From ANON - love4owl on July 12, 2015
    Well, the lemons were hot, but the story was shit, especially the ending.
    Why is Link suddenly fine with the fact that the most he can have with Zelda is an affair?
    Why did Link toss Malon aside like a cum-stained tissue? Even if she's not ready to marry him right this second, his future with her is brighter than his future with the woman who plans to marry someone else, breaks it off with him and then gets upset when she sees him with another woman.
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  • From ANON - Steel on April 17, 2014
    "First, let's talk about bras."
    I laughed imaging Zelda's reaction. Then, proceeded to think about the rest of the things they would talk about.
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  • From ANON - Smuthunter on March 08, 2013
    Few things kill a boner like having an Aesop dropped in the middle of my porn. The sex was good and entertaining but the story such as it was distracts from the real reason the read the story.
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  • From UmbreonMessiah on July 08, 2010
    The ending actually kind of disappoints me, but whatever. Your story, your ending. Whatever works for you! Good job overall!
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  • From jimfromtx on July 07, 2010
    I'd agree, it was good, even with the drama, but the ending felt rushed, forced, just...off, somehow.
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  • From DrakeClawfang on July 05, 2010
    The lemons were hot, and as a Malink shipper I'm biased. The ending was poor though, not much was resolved. Sure things may get more lively in the bedroom for Link and Zelda, but Link is still seen as a commoner and their relationship still needs to be kept secret while Zelda marries someone else. Considering those plot elements were introduced pointedly in their segments, they ultimately didn't really go anywhere.
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  • From ericblaire on June 25, 2010
    I liked most of it, very mature and realistic. I couldn't help but feel that the ending was a cop out, though. Too forgiving, too fast. Also, it doesn't really solve anything; Zelda will still be married to the king, and Link will be a lay on the side.

    Besides that, though, the read was enjoyable, and your writing is something I hope to see more of.
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  • From ninesenshi on June 25, 2010
    Sexy story for a while, but lame ending. Mature in a sense, but lame. I feel sorry for Link, eternally doomed to be a back-door man whenever Zelda can fit him in to her real life. Plus she gets to sleep with the King while Link has to stay faithful. Not much of a life for Link. Would have been better off with him happily nailing the female population of Hyrule. More fair to him, more fun to read. If you wanted to end it fast he should have at least kept Malon.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From karlminion on June 24, 2010
    Ehh... the hot bits were good, but the rest felt contrived and the ending felt forced. What about Malon, what if -she- got pregnant too?

    Basically, your smut is good, but if you're going to have a backdrop and a story behind it they need to be solid. Otherwise it's a waste of time, and it seems forced.
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  • From ericblaire on June 19, 2010
    This story is very well written. The characterizations are very believable and full, and the plot fits snuggly in canon. Keep. I look forward to more.
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  • From UmbreonMessiah on June 18, 2010
    I absolutely love the way this is written. The only problem I have is within the last chapter.

    I don't know...for a moment, it seemed like everything was going to work out for Link. Then suddenly this became some sort of soap opera/Spiderman 3 ripoff where Link was a player and Zelda got pregnant. That was kind of a wallbanger if you ask me. My head's still rattling.

    Keep up the good work though...don't go too overboard!
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  • From FenrisKnight on June 18, 2010
    Loving the Malon scenes, Zelda just doesn't know what she's missing out on. Great twist though at the end of the new chapter! Looking forward to reading more!
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