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Reviews for Awakened Zelenin

By : WotanAnubis
  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2012
    As good as almost all your works are, I think this is probably your very best story that I've seen on this website. I know it's been a while but I really, really hope that you'll some day grace us with a sequel. (A non-futa sequel, I hope. I know you're into that and you actually make it not so bad sometimes, but it's not my thing at all)
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  • From nyxmidnight on March 14, 2011
    Very, very nice!!! I didn't think I could enjoy Zelenin porn so much. There are a few grammatical mistakes left here and there in the story, but nothing overwhelmingly distracting. It would pay to revise, though.

    I read the whole thing, and my favourite chapter was definitely the Pixie one :) Thanks for writing!
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  • From theisland226 on October 07, 2010
    That was great. It was a real treat to read and very hot, especially Part 4.
    Thank you
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2010
    this was wonderful, one of your best, i hope there are more to come but this was perfect
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  • From ANON - Hery on September 29, 2010
    This was great from start to finish, just great, great, great! Thanks so much for making it. Your very talented!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2010
    I'm really sad to see this end. You did such a great job with it, sex, plot, character development, and all. SMTSJ, and more importantly Zelenin, finally got some much needed much DESERVED fan attention, and it was of the best kind. So I'm sad to see this end, and no matter how unlikely you say it is, I'm going to hope real hard that you'll make a sequel some day. But whether or not you do, I just want to say, this is GREAT. You hit a level of quality with this lemon that is at the top of what adult fanfiction is capable of, up there with people like Take Me New and the mysteriously vanished Lemon Rangers. Few lemons here are as good as this one, hell, even YOU don't often manage to get a level of quality this good, and your certainly one of the best writers here. So big high-five to you! Thanks so much for this story, and I hope we'll see a continuation some day.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2010
    Wait...is that the end? It sounds like the end but it could also not be...please let us know if its really the end! Although I hope its not because this fic is great and just what this game and Zelenin needs!
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  • From Mellowcorks on September 18, 2010
    Great story. I think the pixie chapter was my favorite. :)

    Thanks for the password, too!
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  • From ANON - Hery on September 18, 2010
    DAMN that was great! Just, wow! You did Lilith, which is already total WIN, and it was awesome! And I really love the new Lust path you've made with Lilith at its head! The story of this fic is at least as good as the sex, maybe even more, and that's saying a lot! I really hope this won't be the last chapter, that you'll at least have 1 more that concludes whether or not Zelenin's chosen side wins (I hope it does!) Anyway this is great and it makes my day when you update it. Zelenin's the biggest hottie in the series and every chapter of a well written yuri fic about her is exactly what we all need.

    And thanks for the cool bonus! I will totally use that Lilith next time I play
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  • From SailorAF on September 10, 2010
    Amazing serie! I'm surprised someone wrote Strange Journey fic. And it was very good fic (or rather cycle).
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2010
    I don't need to tell you how awesomet his is and hot and stuff, but I wanted to say that you did great with Zelenin's dream, its just the right mix of truth and bizarreness that makes it realistic as a dream
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2010
    Very nice! Cant wait to see who you'll bring in next!
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  • From ANON - Hery on September 04, 2010
    Good stuff again! I can't really think of much more to say, everything is written great as usual and is very hot, and I like the story you're developing with Zelenin. Other than that I don't know what more to say! Besides that I look forward a lot to each new chapter! Here's hoping for Alice, Lilith or Scathach, but it's all great either way!
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  • From theisland226 on September 01, 2010
    I highly recommended this even if you are not familiar with the game. This is a great short sex story that cuts strait to the sex without feeling rushed. It is easy read thanks to clear visuals, distinct charters, and dialogue that has a natural flow to it.

    Probably the strongest aspect of this story is that the sexual encounters are described using Zelenin’s sensations. Pixie’s chapter benefits the most from this as her actions mostly appeal to the fetish she represents, but Zelenin’s sensations make the experience more relatable and enjoyable for everyone.

    As for the plot, it was a nice touch to see Zelenin’s actions drawing attention. Gossiping demons and the changing mood of Zelenin’s crewmates helped make the fictional world feel more real.
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  • From ANON - Hery on August 17, 2010
    You continued this! Great! And it looks like your going to keep going! Super great! And its going to have more than one demon girl showing Zelenin a good time! Super fantastic great! I know you probably don't want any requests, butjust in case your mind is open, I'd love to see Alice, Lilith, and/or especially Scathach! Cant wait to see more!
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