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Reviews for Bison's Women

By : JustS
  • From HappilyDepressed on January 01, 2011
    Nice job, I enjoyed the first chapter! Well written and good details. The only thing I could complain about is the length, being on the shorter side but that isn't even that big of a deal. Don't abandon the story!
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  • From JustS on August 04, 2010
    @bustagroove I did a fair bit of research on this but I think you can appreciate the Street Fighter back story is pretty wide but at the same time not very well documented - it is a fighting game after all. Either consider my work alternate universe (what AFF isn't really?) or that the effects of the mind control are really subtle here.

    @doodle Thanks for the typo correction... I guess. Do you have any opinions on the fic outside of suspect grammar?

    @anon I've no more plans to write about Cammy unless I figure out another interesting angle. I highly recommend you check out "Breaking Free" by Playing Mantis if you'd like another great Cammy AFF.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2010
    Really enjoyed this fic, I love your characterisation and the hate sex. Please write more about Cammy?
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  • From ANON - Doodle on August 01, 2010
    Your story has some spelling errors you need to fix like how it says "bought" instead of "brought"
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  • From Bustagrooven on August 01, 2010
    I enjoyed the read and you've got a style I appreciate, however, you can take this next bit of critic with a grain of salt. I see time and time again how writer's ignore the history of the character and/or story. Cammy was brain washed nearly the entire time under Bison's command so she kind of 'had' to like what she was doing. I very much would like to read more of Bison's Women and you would make me a happy camper if whomever you used next followed the character's mindset and persona.
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