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Reviews for Suikoden Tierkreis - Astrasian Princess

By : Streti
  • From ANON - Green Baron on September 26, 2010
    Wow, chapter 3 ranks among some of your best work. I'm extremely impressed at how expertly crafted this story is. Your writing is great because you always somehow know to key into images that are just incredibly sensual. Bolly, my good sir.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2010
    Too bad this isn't just the sisters. Asad really just ruins it.
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  • From joeparas1988 on September 23, 2010
    Nice work - Pretty hot. I've always been a fan of Chrodechild and Fredegund.

    I'm also a fan of your work and always look forward to your updates (especially your revenant wings story >.> )

    It would be pretty funny if in the next chapter Tsugu pops out of nowhere and bangs Chrodechild before Asad gets a chance. It seems to be the theme with the Tierkreis stories on this site, no? Tsugu the sex god, lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2010
    I love this renaissance of lemon fanfics that has been taking place in the Suikoden section. You guys rule.
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  • From Cross838 on September 19, 2010
    This was pretty enjoyable. I’ve always wanted to see something involving Fred and Chrodechild given their very closeness in the game.

    I liked the reference to Tsugu’s amorous behavior.

    Fred’s determination to lick up Asad’s precum is a hot image.

    Liked this line: “She looked more determined than Chrodechild, yet like her, Fredegund's green eyes were so deep... especially when she had his cock deep in his mouth.”

    You did a good job showing how awkward the situation was for Asad.

    With the addition of the second chapter, this story became 100 percent hotter.

    ‘"You see, I really do love Fredegund in all the ways possible," she said.

    She lowered her head, and started licking and kissing Fredegund's midbody, where his spend lay.’ So hot….
    “Finally, Asad put his cock between the lips of the two messy women, and almost fainted from the sensation when both of them pressed their lips against it and licked and kissed the spent shaft.” Great final image to the story.

    This was well written and highly enjoyable. Very sexy and I love it. I love seeing the two sisters relationship so exposed and Asad going along with it awkwardly was pretty entertaining.

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  • From bonemaster on September 19, 2010
    Not the ordinary Streti fic as it does have a more tender and romantic tone than his previous work. Not being familiar with the game nor its characters this fact really helped me personify the cast and getting a feel for the setting. The characters's actions in the first chapter may perhaps be questionable if it wasn't for the second in which the situation is neatly explained through a cool twist. It's not too often that women have the upper hand in lemons so that is a welcome feature that I wouldn't mind seeing more of.

    In the second chapter I had a hard time telling the females apart. They both have equally complex names but the main reason for me was probably that they were described as copies of one another. Perhaps this reflect the confusion Asad experience throughout the events. As earlier stated the story is a little less pornish than usual but it still feature a couple of luscious Streti-trademark cumshots. Despite the poor amount of feedback you get your stories are ALWAYS a treat!
    Good work friend!

    Btw, I think you should've kept the line. :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2010
    Hmmm, more to come I assume? Either way it's not your typical Streti lemon. I like it though. Nice job. I just started play Tierkreis so I read these stories at my own risk. Even so, it's worth it haha.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2010
    Very interesting, Streti. This is certainly a departure from your usual work which is fine. You certainly showcase your gift at writing detail, albeit not sexual detail. I enjoyed this more cerebral approach to storytelling. I still believe you're at your best with raunchy sex orgies, but this is a nice change of pace. I noticed some slight pacing issues, but really considering this is a chapter intended to lay the groundwork (I hope) for further goings on, it's fine. Keep up the good work, you continue to show improvement as a writer.
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  • From ANON - tscecest on September 12, 2010
    It's actually a bit sad, really, if the story is taken at face value, and Fredegund really does want Asad. To be fair, though, I wasn't too terribly interested in the story: I'm a Chrodechild/Fredegund shipper (even if it's onesided on Fred's part), so an Asad/Fred story doesn't really interest me.
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  • From ANON - Watcher on September 12, 2010
    Well, I liked that one. The sex was further out of focus than is usual for your work, but I enjoyed the story and hope for its continuation.

    Also, in hindsight, that fake-out with Tsugu was funny as h---.
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