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By : Agravain
  • From ANON - gyhy on November 12, 2012
    This is a really great story! I love how you were able to include Ashley and Tali in this story. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - wyatt on June 13, 2012
    i love the story really hope u add more chapters.
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  • From Artamoon on July 08, 2011
    Easily one of my favourite Mass Effect fanfictions on this site. One of the few I have actually returned to on a consistent basis.

    The length of the story is a plus, allowing for very nice plot development before the smut. At times this grows a bit long but it's nice that its there, to provide interest for those who want it.

    Your sexual scenes seem to cover the map in the range of tastes. Ashley's characterization as a dominantor is quite believable given her soldier background in Mass Effect. Tali as the lovable, doe-eyed innocent seduced into a threesome is an excellent scene.

    It's quite clear you know the games very well and from a fellow Mass Effect enthusiast, that is readily apparent. Good show, and an easy 5*. We want more!
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  • From ScarletVenus69 on June 09, 2011
    Damn, this story is good!
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  • From Hewhoisnot on March 02, 2011
    Awesome fic man, the interactions between the charters are well written and though out. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From Deinekes on February 05, 2011
    Very nice work. It shows a lot of effort with results to boot. Congrats on being the first to fold an effective threesome into a Ashley/Shepard pairing and it's obvious that more will come. The only real criticism that I can think of is that you stray a little too deep into the side plot like the girls' shopping. Just that down a little and you'll be great.
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  • From ANON - LegionOwnz on January 17, 2011
    Great story, needs to be continued, hopefully soon. If writing a review helps you, than hell yea, count me in.

    Not many stories (that I've seen) have been able to blend together story and relationships as well as yours. not any other issues that need to be brought up, as far as i see, that haven't been already.

    Again, great story, keep up the good work
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  • From GMB on January 11, 2011
    Love the story. Please say you're gonna update soon? Also when you do update can you notify me through an e-mail?
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  • From on October 17, 2010
    Nobody bothered to leave a review yet so I will. I'm enjoying the story quite a bit so far. I saw some errors here and there but that's fine, it doesn't ruin the story in any way.

    You've made Shepard and Ashley into quite the naughty couple and I find it amusing that Ashley slept with another woman. That will provide you with some interesting ideas for another chapter. Shepard went from jealous and secretly angry that she slept with another guy, to curious and horny when he found out the other was a woman. That's definitely a guy thing, we'd totally react like that. ;)

    The only real complaint I have is that the story is difficult to read at times. You keep erecting some impressively sized Wall of Words and it's something that you might want to work on doing a lot less. The spacing between paragraphs is often used as a mental marker for a reader, and when that paragraph takes up half a page it's easy to accidentally read the same line over again or skip an entire line. Of course it's pretty obvious when a reader does that but stories have a flow to them and that can totally interrupt it.

    Well that is all I have to say about this. I hope you hurry up with the next chapter, I'm really curious as to what you have planned for those two perverts next. ;)
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