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By : Zanshi
  • From Shadowknight12 on October 21, 2010
    Hey, great story you have here! I think the banter between both characters is very well done, and the emphasis on just how great it feels to be back somewhere civilized after a long time in the countryside. I think you could have taken a little more time describing things (having the characters explore their thoughts, their background, the way they relate to each other) to enhance the writing. The sex scene felt a little rushed, but this isn't exactly a bad thing in this particular story, since it reflects the way they're just having a quick fuck to release stress. Something that wasn't quite clear to me was whether or not this was a (semi)usual thing for them or if it was just a spur of the moment event. Especially since it begins with Gunther "holding him in place" which is something unexpected if they're just "friends". And then there's the quip about this being a one-time, never-again-spoken-of thing. Anyway, I just wanted to point out the good stuff and what could use a little work.

    I really liked these two, their interactions are just awesome, and I hope you'll do a sequel someday.
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