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Reviews for AFF Prompt Responses

By : nekokunoichi
  • From Anesor on January 23, 2011
    I can just see the group's reactions, but that instant ends and life goes on. Good pacing in the sand chunk of the tale. Small enough to fit, but still moves the story along.
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  • From JayDee on January 21, 2011
    Noel's dream was pretty darn steamy. You really captured his self confusion well, I sure hope he's able to come to terms with desires as easily as the somewhat more depraved barrel fetishist who's hopefully not gripping him in sleep and thinking "whoo! nice knothole!" Bowman seems a hardass there. 20 year old and 16 year old couples aren't real uncommon in my country though so it may be why I'm thinking he's going hard on em.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2011
    Very nice! The chemistry in this little group is always lively, and poor Noel... wet dreams and being used as a body pillow!
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  • From FairySlayer on January 17, 2011
    4. A Crumbling Reality

    A cliffhanger is always fun, and having a few flashes of sweet erotic behavior is a treat too. Jaded old fool that I am, it would normally be tough for me to think anything of a teen questioning his sexuality, but you managed to remind me of how important, seemingly life-threatening these things feel to a teenager. Instead of, "How's he going to hide the stain in his bedroll? And I hope he didn't get any on Ashton," I can actually empathize with his fear.

    Meanwhile, is Ashton half dreaming that Noel is actually Precis? ;)

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  • From pittwitch on January 17, 2011
    Well done, TN! Ground like a stone into sand - beautiful use of the prompt. And, ahem, nice dreams. :P Thanks for sharing, Pitt
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  • From ApolloImperium on January 17, 2011
    Interesting topic to explore in a prompt TN!
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  • From ApolloImperium on December 06, 2010
    Barrel fetish! That's a new one :D Welcome to the prompts!
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  • From JayDee on December 05, 2010
    I guess the expression "Give 'em both barrels" means something different to that guy! Not familiar with the fandom, but you've got enough details throughout that it made sense to a non-fan like me (for example, the mention of dragons, then giving names as creepy and weepy, then having them on his back, gave a good mental image of the size and characters). The fetish discusion was amusing, and who doesn't love a snowball fight?!
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  • From Shadowknight12 on December 03, 2010
    Bwahahahah, this was hilarious and kind of cute at the same time. The way the two bantered with each other, how it all developed into a big snowball fight, the glorious awkwardness! I have to say, I've never played this game and I still found myself endlessly amused by this story. You're a good writer, definitely keep it up!
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  • From FairySlayer on November 30, 2010
    Without knowing anything about the series I still got a kick out of it. A bit more of their physical appearances earlier on, and perhaps a bit more tantalizing detail ;), would have been helpful since the challenges get a different mix of readers. Even in my normal fanfics I like to throw in a bit anyway just to act as a reminder — but I do understand that there's also a word limit, so I shouldn't even be mentioning this...?

    Anyway, it was a fun and shocking story, and the details about the snow and the silence were enough to make me feel it. Most importantly, I thoroughly loved the very playful ending. :)

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  • From pittwitch on November 30, 2010
    That was very cute, made me smile! I don't know the fandom at all but you included quite enough detail to make this an enjoyable tale to read. Gotta love snowball fights and dragons too! Thanks for sharing, PW
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