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Reviews for Lazy Afternoon

By : RamDragon
  • From JayDee on December 19, 2010
    Ahhh, a sweet little love poem. Since poems are also given as gifts it's got an extra layer for the prompt!
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  • From Shadowknight12 on December 17, 2010
    Very nice poetry! It was very vivid and evocative and still extremely easy to grasp. Very romantic, too. Congratulations!
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  • From pittwitch on December 14, 2010
    I loved the poetic nature of this gift, which feels like a gift in and of itself. Thanks for sharing. PW
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2010
    I'm not familiar with your fandom, but what a wonderfully romantic gift of an afternoon spent loving... nice! :D
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  • From FairySlayer on December 14, 2010
    Regardless of fandom I found the poem beautiful. The idea of cherishing the person, every bit of him, is the best gift, but that adoration is also a subconscious yet genuine gift in itself. I love the imagery she uses to describe her lover too, especially that sound of a small waterfall that I can imagine as pleasured laughter.
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  • From ApolloImperium on December 14, 2010
    I like the poetic style :D Thank you for sharing!
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