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Reviews for Dying Eyes

By : RamDragon
  • From ApolloImperium on January 03, 2011
    I love the format you write these in! Very nice :D
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  • From Anesor on January 02, 2011
    I am impressed you packed that much in so little space.
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  • From JayDee on January 02, 2011
    Good job fitting it all into the drabble format. Very definite ending there... I kind of wonder how it would sound delivered in a death metal growl as opposed to a sombre poem reading voice.
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  • From FairySlayer on January 01, 2011
    It's a beautiful poem even if it is about the death of a beloved comrade, especially for just that moment when the feeling is captures. Though so quick, you know it stays with the character forever. Though for a warrior, that's a great last image to keep and cherish, even in its grimness.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2011
    I'm glad you did another of the prompts. I really enjoy your poems, with their evocative imagery. You capture the mood so well! :D
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