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Reviews for Power is the Ultimate Aphrodisiac

By : AgentSekhmet
  • From ZetSwayy on March 15, 2011
    I want to know more about what happened to her, as horrible as that sounds. Everyone and their mom writes Wesker, but not nearly rough enough for my tastes. Interesting that this is movie-based and not game based... but I like it. Fangirl want moar :D

    And this is written well, also. I hate it when kinky smut fiction is written poorly. This is interest to my relevants.
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  • From RaveEchidna on February 20, 2011
    Okay, considering this is a movie fiction and not a game fiction I have to give it more leeway than I normally would. After all the movies have one of the worst Mary-Sues to ever be created, Alice. So looking beyond the horrible base that you've chosen to work with I see some things that have me still cringing and thinking 'oh my god not another one'.

    I find it hard to believe that your OC is the only female that was available, don't CEO's and powerful people normally have sectaries? Last time I checked that field of work was still dominated by women. Also we're still talking about Albert Wesker right? Why would he pick someone like her? She doesn't seem all that impressive, you mention she's slightly attractive...really is that all it would take. Even is this is the middle of the zombie Apocalypse Wesker seems to have really high standards it seems to me he'd be more willing to bed a knock off Alice or even a brain washed Jill than a girl that used to scrub out the toilets.

    I know we don't know much about your OC, what we do know is that she grew up on a farm, and she's been rapped...many times. Though maybe rape is the wrong word and used is the better one considering the title of the fiction and even the statement that was made about power being the ultimate aphrodisiac, it almost seems like its a bunch of rough sex with dubious consent not rape. I could be wrong. I know it's very early into your story but if you OC's past holds more rape, or dark secret, past relationship to any of the cannon cast it will only add to her Mary-Sue like appearance.

    You've mentioned experimentation, please tell me that she's not going to become as powerful as Wesker, or worse more powerful than Wesker or the Godmod Alice.
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  • From Portableorgy on February 20, 2011
    I think what makes this worse (apart from the completely unoriginal concept) is the fact that it's set in the movie verse. The movies, famous for being so terrible. No wonder yours looks like it's going to follow suit.
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  • From ANON - Tasha on February 17, 2011
    This was actually pretty good. Good explanation as to why Wesker would take her to his bed. I hope you put another chapter in on this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2011
    Is this ff.net? Are we NOT o. An adult site? Seems some people are lying about thier age. I would report the flames. Aft.net does put up with this crap.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2011
    Please go on with the story. It's very intresting and I don't think your OC is a Marysue at all. People usually think OC = Marysue when half the time that's not the case.

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  • From quinncospal on February 14, 2011
    oh god, I sense another mary sue... ffs.
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  • From bloodravyn on February 13, 2011
    i DEFINITELY want this story to continue!
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