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Reviews for Nuhurus and Veloris

By : Yeliah
  • From chipperdyke on April 02, 2011
    Oh my god... amazing. Vividly imagined, detailed, brilliantly phrased... Wow. I love it sooo much.

    The whole Protoss as sexy thing... I really honestly didn't think I would ever go for that. But I TOTALLY did. Mixing human genitalia with the very alien... other things... was occasionally confusing, though, like the "burying his member in her up to the hilt" part.

    I think the reason a lot of people haven't read this is because you don't do a very good job of explaining foreign concepts. I agree on principle - it can be really cumbersome and take away a lot of the story to be constantly explaining basic concepts in the universe. But I think it's hard for people on this site.

    email me at synthwrr@hotmail.com if you want to discuss further!
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