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Reviews for Interspecies Cooperation

By : Xax
  • From ANON - Anne on February 14, 2012
    Oh! I would soo like to see a sequel to this of Dark Jak being the one to fuck the leader of those metal heads! what goes around comes around sucka!

    *Insert evil maniacal laughter here!*
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  • From MrFluffy on February 07, 2012
    I LOVE this story! there really is not enough metalhead porn out there T-T Please continue this somehow
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  • From wanderingaddict on November 05, 2011
    so dude- this buddy of mine was talking about you. I told him to stop a moment, because I had no idea who you were and had never read any of your stuff. so then he's all lime OMG WUT and links me your GF 101 story. I don't know anything about FF, but SHIT DAWG THAT WAS HOT. yeah, it kind of stuck in my brain. for... a very long time. about all I could think of for a while (you know, like Diablos's long digits getting stuffed up Squall's butt). it was pretty fucking rad dude, but god damn is it's review going to take longer than this one. anywho, a week goes by and I page through your other stuff and holy shit! I suddenly see one I DID recognize!

    so like, for ages I tab into the Jak fandom, and you know, it's cute and shit. kind of TOO cutesy (you know, Big Man Jak and Little Miss Dax >.>, would be kind of nice if Dax WASN'T acting like a girl in all the fics but take what you can get know what I'm sayin?). anywho, I've been beating myself up because I TOTALLY spurned your story for like, as long as since you first posted it because not only am I a diehard Jak/human!Dax dude but also I was thinking of like, maybe the metalheads from the first game? the little chompy dudes with wacky arms and giant legs. so it was WEIRD like, to even think about!

    I fucking regret that.

    holy FUCKNUGGETS dude- I mean- ... like, sometimes stuff just sticks with you, you know? specific images. Jak getting caught by surprise when- after the fuck of a lifetime- one of them helpfully comes up to clean the assload of cum from his sore butt- only you know, it's not like "tongue-fuck of the century!!!" it's just him leaning against the wall, totally digging it, WITHOUT the need to make it about climaxing again. just awesome. ridiculously awesome. no pain from the penetration, no gushing blood and wimpy eyes, no sobbing or thinking himself a dirty whore [because you know, girls aren't allowed to think that]. fuck no! he sees a giant floppy cock and he's like fuuuuuuuuuuuuu- I WANT IT IN ME

    seriously, where you fucking rock is those details that make it, hrm, "fucks of the century" type things. *everyone* involved enjoys the shit outta it, and god damn is that a breath of fresh air. if I can offer one critique, it's that some of those same details get overlooked- I want to know the shape of the cockhead against Jak's tongue dude! I want to fucking see how it feels as it stretches his anus! have him play with some nuts man! some big fat ones! you mention them once or twice, but they get lost along the way in the story.

    other than that though, A+ dude. this was an awesome story to read, and I for one am fucking glad you perved up this fandom :P
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  • From ANON - ampm on June 15, 2011
    I fuckin' love your monster porn, don't stop writing it. Really liked the grey gasoline-in-water come in this one, and all the references to the metalic taste & smell. It's a neat sensory addition. And, uh, the gut filled with come and sloshing and all that... >_> jesus I feel wrong typing that. Still super hot though!
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  • From Amaronith on May 27, 2011
    Wow. I read this because my curiosity got the better of me. I actually feel like I need a shower, imagining all that stuff on Jak's skin. This was really vivid, and I could picture everything in my mind as it happened. Excellent work!
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