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Reviews for Remedy the Dreams

By : The74thKing
  • From PyramidHead316 on February 17, 2013
    This was a very good story! You should definitely write a sequel to it.

    I didn't like it very much at first, for some reason. I remember reading it some time ago, probably before you took it down on the other site. It's definitely much better now. ;D

    Still, I don't think Minato is in as much trouble as he thought. ;) If there is anything Aigis has demonstrated in the games it is absolute loyalty to Minato, and the female protagonist in Portable. She probably wouldn't say anything about it to anyone, if he swore her to secrecy. ;) She would probably be more interested in the mechanics than anything, that this is how he gets those Persona powers (using people they don't know about). And if they're really desperate, she can provide them with a suitable distraction to draw away the other SEES members while they escape through the back, or something. ;) Although Minato could just climb down from the second story through the window, if he's willing to risk it. :)

    I like how professional Igor is about it. :) This must be a tough thing for a teenage boy, or any teenager, to talk about to an adult. Basically admitting that their hormones are out of control. The Persona thing is just a bonus.

    Have you thought of doing a version of this with the female protagonist? It would be interesting if Akihiko got caught up in a situation like this over there, because while I don't think Yukari would do much to harm Elizabeth here if they got caught (meaning Aigis ratted Minato and Elizabeth out, to the others), I think Akihiko would definitely wallop Theo if he caught the female protagonist with him, if they were having a relationship at the time. Or Junpei might lose control (for the first time) -- if Akihiko was too conflicted to act and he felt the need to defend his senpai's honor, and he caught this strange man dressed in blue with his best buddy! I also wonder how much Aigis would go out of her way to keep secret a guy she didn't know with the female protagonist, as opposed to a girl she didn't know with Minato. Would she see the male Theo as a bigger threat, or vice versa?

    Anyway, good job!

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