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Reviews for Coq Au Vin

By : JayDee
  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2011
    You know, as much as I like your recent stories JD (and they are very good, with lots of interesting characters, great one-liners, and funny and thoughtful scenarios), I do kinda miss the old JD – you know, the author of such stories as 'Taking the Sky from Kaylee', 'Kill-O-Gram' (with the Great Dane), and 'Flaying Solo', which to this day I still cannot bring myself to read all the way through. I hope you haven't given up on hardcore snuff fics altogether...

    Anyways, on this one: I really liked the part where Elissa's straining to hear the 'low voices in Oghren's tent'. Very subtly evoked (I think that's the right word) scene there, and great how you manage to sketch the imagery so well with just a few sentences. It was also very interesting how you gave the scene two different interpretations: Elissa's mental image of events, and then the actual reality of events as they occurred inside the tent. That gave the story an extra level of depth and realism for me. Plus, the dialogue was great – very 'naturalistic' as my old creative writing teacher used to say :DDDD
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  • From bloodravyn on July 31, 2011
    lol, loved!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2011
    I am simply dying here with the mental images this has created in my brain... Zevran and Oghren. Amazing how well you conjured such vivid pictures with your offstage action - well done! And of course, you've hit on the exact reason none of my characters (save for one rather immoral elf) has ever romanced Leliana. Bards have no honor! :D
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