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Reviews for Dancer

By : ZetSwayy
  • From hercoldhands on October 03, 2012
    Oh my goodness. I read this entire story with a huge smile on my face. Well done. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2012
    And ignore the top reviewer completely -- I think I know a well-versed story when I see it. It wasn't clunky at all, your tropes were wonderful, and the description was intricate and detailed.

    Jeesh.. Some people shouldn't review at-friggen-all.

    -TAM-
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2012
    Wonderful! :3

    I am a bit more open to het recently then I was back in my day -- And lucky for me. This was a great story, well written, beautifully descriptive and the concept wasn't too shabby, either. Did I mention sexy? Don't think I did.

    Great job, and keep it up!!

    -TAM-
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  • From Causalfeelings on February 07, 2012
    You need to show and not tell. All felt a little bit clunky to me.

    Also, I read that fic you were talking about. It felt like it had been written by children -- what's with the chapter of single lines? Please tell whoever did that it comes across as lazy, not some super-clever stylistic choice.
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