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Reviews for A Lesson in Shipboard Discipline

By : NakedOwlMan
  • From ANON - ZeoUnit on December 12, 2014
    Nice one with nice small twist with Tali. Would be interesting to see with other female in series.
    Kinda sad that it ended. Would love to see sequel.
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  • From Gallendro on October 07, 2012
    This story is very well written, being a Dom to my sub-wife I could relate to every bit of punishment handed out to Jack and Miranda. Being a raging Talimancer as they call it, I especially enjoyed the way Tali added herself to the group and began her own form of domination. I have even used a paraphrased version of the punishment detail that she witnessed and performed upon Miranda and implied upon Jack in my own sessions with my wife and other subs in our group of friends.
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  • From ninesenshi on July 20, 2012
    Very satisfying story. It was great to see those two trained. Keep writing stories like this.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From Corwin42 on March 31, 2012
    I have to say, this was really disturbing, even by BDSM standards.
    You make the women BROKEN at the end, and force them to literally get off on torture.
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  • From qweenseeker on February 24, 2012
    just plain awsome.
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  • From KatieJay on February 23, 2012
    Aww dammit. I was hoping for Jack and Miranda to turn the tables on Erin and Tali, and make the both of them their whores for one month.

    How about an alternate ending where this happens? ;)
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