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Reviews for She's My Witch

By : LadyLuck1990
  • From ANON - Frost on December 17, 2013
    Your work is AMAZING and it made my week! I do hope you continue this, as it would bring a smile to my face. Your OC are amazing as well, you have a great Imagination. I would like to see you veer off onto your own story, and i'm excited (Perhaps more Excited than ESO coming out.) to see what happens. Now if you need ANY idea's please, so ask... I have so many that I worry my head might pop. If you can respond, i'd appreciate it.... Keep up the Fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Julia White on March 13, 2013
    It was a good read, but lets face it, you had A LOT of errors. I liked the ending, but also, when you are in a tense (like past tense and present tense), PLEASE try to stay in that tense the whole story unless it's a flash back. and I'm hoping for more between them....
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  • From shadowblade65 on June 16, 2012
    BRILLIANT syory as usual keep up the good work
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  • From Jade_Obsession on May 15, 2012
    oh i am SOO happy they got re-united!!
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  • From Jade_Obsession on April 07, 2012
    is there gonna be more to this?!
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  • From shadowblade65 on March 07, 2012
    excellent its good to see Angels back liking this story already keep up the good work oh btw don't forget about your other stories its to see your back
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  • From Wankyudo on March 04, 2012
    Good first chapter and all, but the grammar nazi is screaming to point out several the errors. There's several small things like Bodyguard being one word (If you separate the two, then it literally becomes guard of a body, whereas together it becomes a person's job/title.) or improper capitalizations (eighteen, rosary, katana, that kind of stuff.) There's also sentence fragments, punctuation problems, etc. and etc.

    There's also kind of a...lack of coherency in the story. I would suggest labeling flashbacks as one moment I'm seeing her go to sleep, and then the next she's in Times Square. So it leaves me wondering "Did she just magically get the power to teleport?"
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