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Reviews for What awaits me

By : luluzat
  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2012
    The proper spelling is 'Keelah'
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  • From Wankyudo on March 15, 2012
    As someone said, you should do some heavy editting (Or have a friend edit) the story before posting. A lot of run-ons, and not the best spacing.

    Oh, and it's Keelah. Their favorite saying to each other is Keelah se'lai
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  • From Causalfeelings on March 15, 2012
    You might want to learn how to punctuate properly before writing anything.
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  • From shadowblade65 on March 15, 2012
    EXCELLENT story i agree with you on the ending definitely could have put abit more affort into the final scene but anyway keep up the good work am looking forward to see where you take this story
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