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Reviews for Flowers in Bloom

By : WotanAnubis
  • From ThePairingGuy on November 12, 2015
    One of the best fics I've read on this site in years. Loving heterosexual affairs are my personal favorite fetish too, and suffer from a criminal lack of coverage on this site. Picking a canon pairing also lets you bypass the almost invariably unconvincing pretexts for the two characters having sex, too. ...Well, except that the game heavily implied that Aeron and Elena were following conventional sexual morals, but it's a lot easier to look past that than it is to look past contrived scenarios like the characters being mind-controlled.

    Anyway, this is very solidly written stuff. You characterized Aeron and Elena very well, and once you've waived their established sexual behaviors, Elena becoming pregnant while still bearing her curse is a very intriguing concept which you manage to explore a little whilst wasting no time in getting to the smut. All very well-written, and in character, which for me at least makes it more arousing. Ironically, I find that realistic awkwardness, like the discomfort of having sex with a pregnant Elena in the usual position, makes the smut more stimulating as well. The only fumble was where Aeron wanted to eat his own sperm; I'm sure not everyone finds that as repulsive as I do, but I find it hard to imagine anyone finding it actually stimulating. If there is such a person, I don't think they'd be drawn to simple M/F fics. That minor complaint aside, this was consistently hot, heavy, heart-warming, and utterly memorable. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - V on May 03, 2012
    I don't know much about the game, but this was both erotic and utterly adorable. It's nice to see loving heterosexual sex as part of this site- it seems so often to be not present, and it is pretty high amongst my kinks (I know, how mundane). Well written- nothing broke me out of the flow of the story, and 'transparency' of text is basically my hallmark for technically good writing. As for the other half, it's also erotic and sweet, so this one is an all star all around. Well done!
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