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Reviews for In the Land of Arborea

By : Sweetsong22
  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on May 31, 2012
    Oh my, surprise finding you here, LOL!

    Ok, I just wanted to let you know that I will continue stalking this story (and all your stories) like forever.

    Please don't think that this story will die a slow and terrible death because that's so not true.... Well, at least not as long as I am around to read it. Please extend it to 10 chapters that would be fantastic!!! Yes, I would really enjoy reading more of this. Plus, I was thinking you could perhaps right a one-shot of how Tristtan and Luceus first met, that would be super awesome.

    Your devoted fan but crazy and yes nutty fan,

    DAC


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  • From ANON - Nine on May 30, 2012
    wahhhh!
    Poor little uke! this is very worrying!! I just want lover boy Castian(?) general to come and rescue him and make it all better again...
    and dammit! his general needs to recognise him as the man he is! a capable and fearsome archer... although i thought it was so sweet that he didn't want his beloved to face the danger of war...
    and then I thought it was hilarious that the little elf, wanting to prove how capable he is... went and got himself kidnapped...
    classic uke move... but then we love them for it, don't we lol
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on May 29, 2012
    Well, storm seems to have finally passed to I am just popping in one more time then I have to get to bed it's way too late for me.

    I wanted to let you know that I looked at the links you gave us of the characters and they are really awesome! I love Tristtan he looks just like his parents! Luceus is how I would picture him in my mind looking. Ulrickk is going to give me nightmares tonight along with all the lightening we had.

    I won't be checking in until tomorrow night so see ya then!
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on May 29, 2012
    Oh my gosh! What an evil way to leave a cliffhanger, you naughty author.... shame on you, just kidding!

    Wow, so much happened in this chapter and we even got to meet Tristtan's parents for a few brief moments. I like his mother, Laeyla but his father, Reginaldd is a royal no. one jerk. So, he changed after Tristtan was born, I wonder why. I am really curious now as to how his mother is going to react when she finds out her son has been kidnapped.

    Oh, poor Tristtan! I hope that Luceus slowly tortures Ulrikk, Grannger and Bartram and then pushes them into the pit and feeding them to those Fallen Defenders who are making a meal out of Tristtan.....

    Well, I gotta make this short, we are having a very severe thunderstorm and I am freaked out by the lightening so gotta sign off.......






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  • From ANON - pupette on May 29, 2012
    Hei I just wanted to say that I really like your stories so far.You have good plots combined with great steamy scenes and most importantly you writing is really good.The plot flows naturally,not too rushed and not too boring either,considering the length of your chapters (they're just perfect,I hate short chapters).
    But the best part is the whole "uploading policy".Event though you will let some time pass between writing new stories at least when you do they will be almost completed.It's really frustrating when you get really bad into a story and realise that the author will update twice a year or never.
    I think it's a good idea to integrate some parts with another characters too,so I'm sure it will be all good.
    Good luck on writing, I'm really curious about what's going to happen to poor Tristtan.
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  • From Bloomsbabe11377 on May 27, 2012
    LOVE THIS STORY! I hope Tristan is not too broken (mentally at least) by the time Luceus comes for him! Seriously, GREAT writing!

    XoXo
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on May 27, 2012
    I just went and checked the games section and didn't even see a subcategory for Terra Online fanfiction. I really like this story so will check that section if you remove it from Original so I can follow it. Good luck with all this.
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on May 27, 2012
    I just went to your forum page for this story and saw a post by one of AFF's moderator's who posted this message;

    (As this is based on a game, you'll want to add this story to the games subdomain, not original.)

    I have been following other entertaining stories which have got deleted for certain reasons so please don't let that happen to this one because they might do that to you because it's in the wrong 'subdomain' and they have warned you so to speak. Although, I don't see what the problem is with leaving it under the Original/Erotica section but you don't want to get into trouble or anything and they are a stickler for TOS rules and all that.

    I just thought you would want to know in case you haven't checked the forum.


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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on May 27, 2012
    Oh my gosh! I didn't realize you had started a whole new story because I have been keeping an eye out for updates on Synergy but can't complain because this one is another gem. I am hooked on it already, go figure, LOL. I really hope that Luceus can get to Tristtan before Ulrikk and his entourage do too much damage. I think I can picture Tristtan looking like Legolas in the Lord of the Rings trilogy.


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  • From LaffyTaffy on May 27, 2012
    Cool story! I love the videos that let us see the characters! Can't wait for the 3rd chapter!
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