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Reviews for Love:: Misunderstanding

By : hachi-miitsu
  • From AFFModerator on January 08, 2014

    Chapter 20 - Please add the proper citation(s).


    While reviewing your story, we noticed that you cite or quote from another source, but it's not properly cited. It's not correct to add the source to your disclaimer, since that doesn't serve as a proper citation. You should look at the all the examples in the FAQ listed below, but as a quick example, if you've used lyrics to a song, you can add a line at the beginning or end of the chapter that states something like: Lyrics from "(Song Title)" by (Artist)


    What happens if the citation isn't added? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it. At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.


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    http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097


    We also suggest taking a few minutes to read the Content Guidelines:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/guidelines.php


    You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.


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  • From ANON - Akaku on November 25, 2012
    Wow I've read a lot of fan fiction but very few have caught me like this one does. I really hope you plan to finish it. Anyways I like the Zion sex change. At I was like the author does know that's supposed to be a girl right then I read your comments. Rojas for the win! He is no longer a sniveling coward but some what of a bad ass now! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Lbot on October 10, 2012
    I love this story. Please keep writing.
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  • From angrymuffin on June 27, 2012
    I really like this story so far, especially because of chapter 3. I enjoy drama and twists and you are certainly covering both of those in this story quite well. I think you write all of the characters exceptionally well, even Roxas during that fight scene. I think anyone with his size and personality would have a little fear for what could happen. But you also had him fight back a little himself, which really kept him in character. He gets scared just as much as the next person, but he seems like the kind who won't go down without a fight. When it comes to Axel, however, that's a different story. Even though this is an alternate story, Roxas was still openly showing his worry for Axel in the game. So that bit is completely legit.

    The actual fight itself though. Wow. I envy you. How in the world did you ever manage to write something so wonderfully orchestrated and flawless? I try to write a fight scene between brothers and fail miserably. So my deepest compliments to you for doing such a great job. Even with Xigbar being creepy and leeching on Roxas--very well written. I could feel Roxas's fear and determination. I feel the cold and the rain. I could hear their voices perfectly. Your writing imagery is fantastic!

    I will make sure to keep an eye on this story for new updates. I'm eager to find out what happens now.

    Take your time updating, and be sure to have fun doing it. ^^
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