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Reviews for The Problem With The Animus

By : A.K.O.Shifting-Shadow
  • From ANON - CupCayke on May 26, 2014
    Nooo you can't stop no I need more
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  • From ANON - BVB on March 26, 2013
    Just a quick review for the second chapter (well, suggestions really). It's good so far. You really seem to have visualised the story.
    However, including authors notes in the middle of a story breaks the flow of the story and distracts the reader. Secondly, if you're writing a game fic, try to focus on telling a story without including things that sound more like gameplay, like activating eagle vision or pointing out things in the game that are inconsistent with reality (ie, no one noticing the skull mechanism).
    Hope this helps and isn't a complete downer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2012
    love the story hop you write more soon or one where desmond meets connor
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  • From ANON - Waffles on September 17, 2012
    Wow, this was a really enjoyable read! Can't believe I was able to find such a gem! x3 I noticed there were a few typos throughout a few of the chapters, but they were easily ignored. I hope you continue to make more chapters. I look Forward to More chapters! BTW this was sizzlingly Hot. xD
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