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By : DrkVrtx
  • From HunterOpera on December 06, 2012
    And the fun continues. I like the healthy sense of fun between Samus and Zelda in this story, the way the two of them work with one another. I love the predatory sense you've given Samus, and the noble pragmatism of Zelda very much fits with the whole Twilight Princess thing. I could nitpick the prose a little, but there's very few flaws that aren't preference; I just want more of this story, more of your writing, and more of the world you're building. Really dig the way you're making sense of the crossover and how everything fits together.

    This is excellent stuff. Continue, please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2012
    Sexy. More armpit play!
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  • From HunterOpera on November 28, 2012
    Beautiful, the sense of flow and urgency. Your choice of words is exquisite and the subdued arrogance of Zelda is delicious. Also a fan of your Samus, the the not-quite-gentle predatory presence she's giving off in your writing. I'm imagining Twilight Princess Zelda for some reason - which one were you aiming for?
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