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Reviews for Blue

By : DoveCG
  • From Hashbard on January 23, 2013
    I think I need to explain something.

    The fact I deleted all my stories has nothing to do with your review; in fact, I read your review way too late. This incident seems nothing to me but weird timing. At that time, I was infuriated by the moderators here, who made my original story hidden because in my disclaimer I mentioned that I put my story part of the public domain. It made my blood boil that, apparently, I couldn't even revoke all the copyright from my work because of the rules. It may sound absurd, but that was how the thing went. It still seems absurd to me.

    Also, back then I reread the TOS - basically a list of things everyone knows without the need to have rules enforced on them - and found it rather authoritarian for a site dealing with erotica and, nowadays, Sadean styled porn(which, however, seems to have none of the philosophical implications of Sade's work), especially the clause that, in case of rule break, the account would be deleted without notice (it's even highlighted in bold).

    Now that I've been away from the site for some time, and understood there's no point in explaining something to people who hold power, even if its over the net - it's virtually impossible interacting normally with a person who has the right to punish you and thinks of himself as a holder of order because he has some special semantic mark, be it word, the colour of his name, a badge or whatever - I calmed down a little and decided to put some stuff here.
    (In case if someone's wondering why I use AFFnet all,it's because I don't want to expose kids ad teenagers to certain stuff that I write. I find certain philosophical and practical notions are more suitable for an adult. Let kids be kids.)

    That said, I must say that i liked the review. The range of the emotions you felt while reading my fic showed that at least was done right. I know that my style can be quirky and heavy, but I really enjoy Lovecraftian fiction, and I like to write sexual scenes in this gothic style. I may try to write some stuff in an easier style.

    I find your fic very nice; and you really didn't need to read the Supreme Secret to the end because you've spelled It in extremely clear language at several points in your fic.

    I think you got Daxter's personality pretty good through his monologue; and certain parts definitely like him talking, although in a more mature way than I see the game. The first person view and the writing style fitted his personality, in my opinion.

    The end was sad, though, but it felt natural to me. No sap, nothing really fluffy, just the way life is. In my view, it added depth to the story.

    To sum up, it was, in my opinion, a great read.


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