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Reviews for The Games We Play (Redux)

By : LordDBurroughs
  • From ANON - Moonrunner on September 01, 2013
    So, any idea/chance when/if this will be continued? Perhaps you could re-post the original version so people can enjoy it while you're re-writing it bit by bit or somesuch?
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  • From ANON - Lance on August 06, 2013
    Considering the lack of updates is there any chance you could put the old version back up while you write the old one?

    That way if you die as what seems to have happened we'll at least have your imperfect versions.
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  • From ANON - Leo on August 01, 2013
    Would it be possible to get a copy of the original story? Just to tide over until the update comes.
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  • From axel4340 on July 09, 2013
    got to say, really hoping you are still working on this story. the original was the best dragon age story i have ever seen.
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  • From ANON - GrizzlyScholar on June 02, 2013
    Dude, I loved the original, so I really, really hope you continue this!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2013
    If you don't think you'll be able to do the rewrites could you at least put the old versions back up?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2013
    Re-write looks good, though I *really* wish you'd left the original version up and done the re-write in a seperate story, or inserted bit-by-bit-
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  • From ANON - Gentleman on May 01, 2013
    You good sir or madam are an insanely evil personage undeserving of such wickedly awesome writing abilities. You remove what was the best Dragon Age hetrosexual lemon series and post a reboot of it. For shame that you didn't even leave it up for your followers to enjoy or even offer to host a downloadable copy.

    I protest this coarse of action and demand a reposting post haste or more new smutty goodness to forthcoming quite quickly.

    Good day Sir or Madam


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  • From ANON - pancora on April 07, 2013
    Awesome to see some of your work back!

    Would it be possible to get a copy of all your old stuff? I really liked the FF12 story you wrote, and it doesn't seem like you'll be rewriting it. No problem if you can't or don't want to, but it would be nice.
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  • From froop on April 03, 2013
    Glad to see this is back. Scared me a bit when I went to check for updates and it was gone.

    Still one the best and hottest lemons I have ever read. And the story isn't terrible for porn either.
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  • From TTrunks on March 30, 2013
    I feel really REALLY bad for you. I really wish you hadn't' taken down your story, since that way lies the path to madness. Any decent Fan Fic author knows you NEVER REVISIT OLD STUFF. It always ALWAYS ends horribly. heck i know one author whose been trying to edit and repost a story for over a year now. It never ends well for an author since we are in large our own worst critics.

    Of course, I'm not trying to be down on you. I did the same thing ((Thus why most of my stories are Meh at best and odds are never getting done)), and I honestly hope your one of those people who can beat the odds. Your story was awesome and if you can actually deliver on the whole "Redux" thing, the more power too you. Just beware the pitfalls.

    Honestly, I am a bit worried about you humanizing Mathias. Honestly, he's one of those characters whose really good as a douche. Out for himself really and doing who or what he wants. Making him nicer, may make him less of a badass character. be aware of he fine line because too much development makes him into either a whiny person "Trying to get revenge" or just a twit. Before he was a bit almost evil but it worked for him.

    Anyway, awesome story, good luck on the "Redux" thing.
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  • From ANON - Red997 on March 30, 2013
    Glad to see it back up! I was worried when it disappeared all of the sudden. The original was one of the best stories on this site. I have high hopes for the redux. Keep up the good work.

    Best Wishes,

    Red
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  • From Skelo on March 25, 2013
    Hello glad to see you're back!!! You better be updating like crazy, I loved the original and would check every two weeks. Plz update really really quickly!!!!!
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  • From allenirre on March 25, 2013
    Love it but please hurry up and update! :-)
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  • From ANON - The Goblin Slayer on March 22, 2013
    I wish there were more.
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