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Reviews for Dar'Yoon's Very Naked Adventures

By : Tokage
  • From Alleyway_Ravager on August 09, 2013
    And geeze, only 4 reviews? One of which is an AFF report? NOT NEARLY ENOUGH! People on this site need to learn to leave a comment or two!
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  • From Alleyway_Ravager on August 09, 2013
    Man this is GREAT stuff. Chapter 3 was an excellent rape scene, something my sick mind can appreciate. Loved the helplessness of the situation for her and the slow buildup. I really hope she ended up pregnant from that encounter as that would just make things perfect. Love the idea of that troll leaving her something to remember him by.

    Looking forward to more work from you in the future!
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  • From ANON - Ves on August 08, 2013
    Amazing story, and excellent continuation with chapter four! Loved all the impregnation/risk of pregnancy going on!
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  • From ANON - Drago on August 06, 2013
    I rather enjoyed this story, overall. The premise is quite amusing. I'd particularly like to see a follow-up to the third chapter, come what may from it.
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  • From AFFModerator on July 30, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.


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  • From DrChristmas on July 29, 2013
    Formatting: Learn it.

    It physically hurts to read a huge block of text like that.
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