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Reviews for A Curse Upon You

By : Omgitsgary
  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2014
    I very much enjoyed this story! It's quite well written; though it might not matter to everyone, I always find excellent grammar and word choice give a story that extra oomph. As for the premise, I find it quite interesting. There's something quite exciting about a completely naive young woman being corrupted by the darkness in the universe.

    As to the plot, it seems our little priestess is set on the path to become a PoW for the Horde... about as unlucky as you could be. I do hope that the story expands from there, though... theoretically, once you're unlucky enough to become a slave/PoW, how much less lucky can you get? I think the key is to have it be a gradual destruction of innocence.

    That being said, I'm quite hopeful based on what has been shown so far and I'm sure you'll do yourself proud.

    Kudos.
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