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Reviews for The Wolf's Snare

By : JustS
  • From What_Up on May 23, 2014
    This is almost exactly what I wanted. YES! It's a little short but I love it. One thing I'd like to add as a possible show for Lara. Letting her hair down. Literally. The pony tail is practical and sexy, But if she let her hair flow free I feel it would be the literal perfect embodiment of Lara fully giving over to Jen and the wolves.
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  • From MorbidFantasy on May 18, 2014
    While I'm not categorically against the idea of pregnancy with cross-species, I feel that the pregnancy shouldn't be used gratuitously, and at least in this context it doesn't seem to entertain me as much as the non-pregnancy chapter, which in my opinion was better written and flowed better with the rest of the story.

    You could have Lara's hormones change from the constant animal sex to the point that she starts lactating, which the pups from other female wolves then start suckling at, which makes the pups suckling her bonded/loyal to her. Just a thought.
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  • From JayDee on May 13, 2014
    Hi! Got through the first three parts, I hope you didn't get too much stick over the plot-heavy part 2, there's nothing wrong with that stuff. It's a story, after all. Part 3 was pretty interesting, like the pack dynamics and the positions. And finishing with part 1, I think there were some parts that could have used a little more detail, but it was pretty good. Are you sure the only inspiration for it was animated gifs, 'cos it reminds me of something else I read sometime! Probably just coincidence :)
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  • From Destroyahirismix666 on May 12, 2014
    This is definately one of the more interesting TR stories I've really bothered reading, mainly because of this new chapter.
    But both versions leave me with an interesting question. How are the wolves on this island still living? Plainly there are only males, no females. Unless they are immortal or something of that nature, it runs into an issue my brain is really breaking itself over.

    Other then that issue though, this story is actually moving with a purpose, and that encourages me. No longer is it just smut without plot, you've given it some development now.

    I'll be interested to see how the two paths roll from here on out, as I can say that both will likely hold a very interesting direction.
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  • From ANON - Someone on May 10, 2014
    What can I say? Love it
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  • From What_Up on May 10, 2014
    Hey, I want to know if you'll take a prompt for this? I could Lara wake up and find Jenifer being fucked by one of the wolves, and Lara joins in (Fucked by a wolf) and on impulse kisses Jenifer, becacause they are facing eachother while it's happening, start making out while the wolves fuck them, then Lara and Jen have lesbian sex while the wolves watch.
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  • From ninesenshi on May 10, 2014
    Read both branches. Not especially fond of this plot direction but glad to see you are including a pregnancy option. It should really be safe to have vaginal sex until the pregnancy is well advanced. Well written, hope for more soon.
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  • From ninesenshi on April 27, 2014
    Chap 5 was very hot, especially the last scene. I was getting impatient so it was good to see the update. Hope for more soon! Preggers! Preggers!
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  • From snake1980 on April 26, 2014
    what a chapter. u just keep getting better and better. the way lara is im guessing when she finally gets off the island and get home I bet she will get a dog of her own to have fun with. have to wait and see. I do have a question was wondering have u ever thought of doing a naruto version of this story were akamaru goes around and do the girls of the leaf? but anyways still great job and looking forward to the next and future chapters of this story
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  • From ANON - Someone on April 24, 2014
    I like it, please more, maybe something like Stockholm syndrome (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stockholm_syndrome) or even pregnancy. I would read and appreciate it :)
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  • From snake1980 on March 24, 2014
    man great job on the new chapter its getting better and better the more chapters u dish out. maybe the next wolf can miss her pussy and do her anal? have to wait and see still keep up the great work and keep those chapters coming
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  • From ninesenshi on March 23, 2014
    Good to see another chapter (4) and Lara getting more submissive. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - darklink1011 on March 10, 2014
    pretty good story as for my vote I'm hoping for preggo route.
    you can always just do different chapters for each "ending" so to speak.
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  • From ninesenshi on March 10, 2014
    Two Anons using basically the same wording? Seems suspicious to me. Any actual member votes?
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  • From ANON - Anon! on March 08, 2014
    Loving it so far :)

    In response to your question in Chp. 3, definitely keep it real! Too many Tomb Raider fics go waaaaay out there, this one is good!
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