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Reviews for Chicken!

By : Shinashi
  • From Tifanny__ on September 25, 2020

    Honestly, I don't know if I like or hate this. Probably the former more than the latter. Apart from the humiliating piss shower that made me very uncomfortable, I actually find this pretty hilarious. I like the focus on different characters' POV in each chapter. My poor baby Forest! He doesn't deserve to be in this mess. I wonder if you'll ever continue the story. This is getting really intriguing. I want to know who this mad scientist is! 


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  • From ANON - Lily on April 13, 2014
    Now that's a good story, I can't wait for the rest :)
    Plus, I'm glad to see slim Bob, it's pretty rare! oh, and poor Hwoarang!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on March 15, 2014
    Damn, it cut off my comment. Good thing I copied it just in case something went wrong, so I can paste the rest.

    - "Give him some time," - Lars is such a good guy. :)
    - Hwoarang smiling when Bryan got shocked made me laugh, I admit.
    - I heartily approve of the kiss at the end.

    I gotta say, watersports is NOT something that I have ever read (until now)/have any interest in, but you managed to write it pretty well. I can't imagine how humiliating that was for Hwoarang. I definitely feel for the guy. I'm glad that he got a shower.

    A couple things I want to point out (constructive criticism!):

    "No? So... My sister died for nothing?" / Jin probably had no idea who Miguel was talking about - I would think Jin would figure out that Miguel was talking about his sister given what was said...? Unless you meant literally as in who, as in Jin wouldn't have known her personally. I thought I'd mention it since something about this seemed a little off to me.

    The first try he put in only thirty, and the shock was nearly made him pass out. - The second part of that sentence doesn't make sense. Just thought I'd throw that out there.

    Well, that's my NOVEL of a comment. Good luck with the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on March 15, 2014
    I think you misunderstood what I meant by Forest coming out on top. In your summary for the story you mentioned who will break/who will come out a king, so my comment about Forest coming out on top/winning/being victorious just meant that I didn't want him to fail at the tests and to succeed at said tests. Hopefully that clears up any confusion.

    Anyway, I'm happy to hear about Lars being "first," haha. I'm incredibly biased, though.

    I'm curious about the two ideas in mind for A, so I'll just have to wait and see what happens.

    Now, onto the newest chapter:

    - Hwoarang correcting Miguel on the pronunciation of his name amused me.
    - "Give him some time,"
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on March 04, 2014
    I don't think I've laughed this hard at a story in a while. That's a good thing, by the way.

    Man, I hope Forest comes out on top. Forest winning would be such an unexpected turn of events that I can't help but cheer for the guy. I'm a Lars woman, but I really want Forest to be victorious.

    Other points of interest:

    - I felt bad for Steve. Eddy was being an ass. I'm glad that Lars gave him a piece of his mind.
    - Jin apparently knows how to suck dick. Interesting. I'm guessing he's sucked Hwoarang's dick plenty of times given how they were acting in that circle.
    - Kazuya is awesome in this. I love his antics. Lee as well. Lee is always awesome, though. I also quite enjoyed Bruce's personality.

    Don't have much else to say other than, I hope: (A) Bryan gets what he deserves (preferably from Forest, Marshall, or Paul), (B) Dragunov actually SAYS something (preferably a snarky one-liner), (C) Lars fucks Jin (just because it'd be damn HOT), and (D) everyone eventually figures out WTF is going on with that mysterious voice/doctor.
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  • From ninesenshi on March 04, 2014
    FYI, if this is YAOI, or M/M...Code appropriately!
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