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Reviews for Shokan Lust

By : JayDee
  • From ninesenshi on October 09, 2014
    Enjoying the hotness. I like seeing Sonya pierced and tamed. Hoping for more fisting and domination.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2014
    I like most of the story, very sexy. I don't like the rape scene here. It's not as blatantly manipulative and unnecessary as most stories' rape scenes are, but a wise writer once told me that, when writing stories, rape is the clumsy hammer that a better writer casts aside in favor of more subtle tools. "Save the girl from rape" is a tired, unimaginative, trite, and honestly very offensive cliche in fanfiction, being used as a crude way of emotionally uniting two characters (the victim/almost-victim and the rescuer) when the writer lacks the creativity and skill to forge and prove that emotional bond through real means. And the fact that it's used so casually, that this vile and horrible act that scars the psyche is a thoughtless go-to device for fic writers...it's really disturbing. It's disappointing to see it here, because you're good enough to do better.
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  • From archon1980 on September 03, 2014
    I haven't read a story by JD that I haven't enjoyed. This is no exception. Hope theres more coming soon. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ninesenshi on September 03, 2014
    Good to see chap5. A few word errors. Not my favorite chap, mostly just gory, but I enjoyed seeing Sonya getting dommed. Looking forward to kicking (hopefully that refers to penetration with a foot) though your comment after that leaves me puzzled.
    Hoping for more soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2014
    If you don't release the next chapter soon, I'm going to rip your spine out of your ass and then whip you with it.
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  • From LadyLuck1990 on August 02, 2014
    oh :D I like this story a lot. I can't wait to see what else happens.
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  • From ANON - Some Guy on July 28, 2014
    I like the story, I do hope you continue it! It's very hot, love the idea of Sonya getting high off Shokan pheromones and falling in love (?) Cool take on dub-con. Also Sheeva's hot as eff gurl
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2014
    Liking this story a lot.
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  • From ninesenshi on July 17, 2014
    Great chap 4! I appreciated the references to Sonya's body hair, stubble and dream muff. Would also enjoy Sheeva playing with Sonya's hairy armpit. Good sex scenes, I like the way Sonya is being trained. I hope all ends happily with this pair. Looking forward to next chap!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2014
    i like how sonya is getting proper trained in this chapter
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  • From ANON - Nemo on July 16, 2014
    Interesting story. I look forward to reading more, but I hope that Sheeva will give in and let Sonya use those thighs on some deserving victim soon (even if it isn't Kano).
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2014
    You want my review that badly? Fine. I don't like anal stuff. Most women don't. Dildos are like cocks: they aren't the big main event that men think they are and that this chapter's making them out to be. Tongues, fingers, certain other toys, there are lots of other, more dextrous methods of pleasure that are much more enjoyable. I've even had a halfway skilled set of toes do more for me than half the dildos and three quarters of the dicks I've had before. Your writing is good but your narrative perspective seems less and less like the women you're writing. I like this story and I'm still reading it, but a large portion of this chapter is disappointing and does nothing for me.

    I'd have just shut up and let you do your thing, but you wanted a review, so there it is. Sorry. Sometimes it's nicer for your readers to hold their tongues.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2014
    This just keeps getting more and more delicious. Looking forward to the next part!
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  • From ninesenshi on July 03, 2014
    Chap3, very good! Sexy stuff. Hope to read more soon. With fisting. Hopefully Sheeva will make a good pet of Sonya.
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  • From ANON - Mellow Tangelo on July 02, 2014
    Looks like these bitches need a man to give'em a good dicking. Don't listen to any of these pretentious, deluded little dykes in the other reviews, no matter what she wants to believe every woman wants a man to fuck them, they're never going to be happy and satisfied without it. Next chapter, have one of the MK men come in and show that whore Sheeva her place. It doesn't matter which guy, any of them will do, even that wuss Stryker can automatically out-fuck both of them.
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