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By : sillyneko345
  • From ANON - Beabe on January 30, 2015
    Great story, but couldn't see picture from link.
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  • From ANON - gmb on December 19, 2014
    Awesomeness! Samoa as a tiny Precursor....hehehe.....
    As, Tess wants to be a mom. LoL. Jak knotting with them is funny. FAX is like "whaaa?"
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  • From ANON - nikki on December 17, 2014
    Great story.keep writing please?
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  • From ANON - GMB on November 12, 2014
    Bow-chica-bow-wow

    Lmbo! I couldn't help it. I had to say it. Loved the chapter!
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  • From ANON - Angie on November 11, 2014
    That would be awesome! Tehe....wonder how Tess would react to that?
    I'll be updating my story on ff.net very soon too. I took more time to write this next chapter. I'm having fun doing it too!!! I haven't written in a long time; mostly because life gets in the way, but also because people can be really mean. When I finished Two Idiots and a Genius with my friend I got a lot of negative PM bs and I didn't start writing again until this year. Thanks for inspiring me!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angie on October 16, 2014
    I wrote the first two chapters to an ottsel centric story on ff.net here's the link. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10761275/1/The-Precursor-Legacy I credited you on inspiration. I written there before and kinda just quit because I don't think I'm very good and I get too busy to post stuff, but I'm deffinately going to do this story. You are my muse right now. LoL
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  • From ANON - Angie on October 12, 2014
    Okay, I'll try. I'm on ff.net only; so I'll tell you when I post it.

    But Jak got to go Dark and got some supper cute and sexy snuggle time with his two besties! *squeal for cuteness*
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  • From ANON - GMB on October 12, 2014
    Yay, Jak gets some lovin'!

    It was an awesome chapter. Poor Sig; nobody tells him nothing. LoL.
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  • From ANON - Liz on October 06, 2014
    Just happened to find your story. Love it!!!! *wink*
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Angie on August 30, 2014
    Loved this one!!!

    I would but I suck at storytelling. I can't spin wild stories. LoL. I can however come up with ideas. I thought you'd like this is all.
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  • From ANON - dc on August 29, 2014
    Hahahaha, a ticklish, skinny teen Daxter pile-glomped by a group of horny ottsels! Or just Jak. Ahhh, Daxter, you're soo easy to embarrass in a good way.
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  • From ANON - Angie on August 15, 2014
    I really, really, really like this story. Why hasn't anybody ever thought of doing a Jak ottsel story? OMG, why hasn't anybody done a story where everybody are naturally ottsel a and when Dax falls into Eco he comes out as an elf/human? That would be EPIC!!!!LoL
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on August 10, 2014
    Aw, yeah. Getting Jak back in action! Just what the boy needs right now. Well, in addition to "special attention" from his friends, I mean. ;) But does this mean we'll see some Dark Ottsel action soon? If anything's going to push him that far, it'll be Dax getting nommed on by Metalheads...

    Squee! I can't wait! XD
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  • From ANON - Skunktail on August 09, 2014
    its still looking very good :3 Jak has to get an ottsel sized blaster!
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  • From ANON - rockenrosy on August 07, 2014
    Loved this story. Cannot wait for another chapter. Jak and Daxter ottsel exterminators. LoL
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