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Reviews for Link And His Ladies

By : Samson
  • From ANON - Skeletor on June 20, 2015
    omfg im so pissed at my kindle rn I typed for like at least 5 mins and it didnt post the second review.... I guess I'll retype it....
    Anyways, wow I got really mad there... and I had meant to say at the beginning that I want to say fuck you not I want to fuck you... idk how that happened but nothing I can do about it now... Also, basically shortening this time typing this second review, in all my reading of regular books and fanfics, it is extremely rare for me to get that emotional about a story... and most of the time, it is from only a few writers... You definitely have a lot of talent.... And after reading your response to another review, I realize how the whole thing with Navi leaving had to happen... To be honest, I havent really played much of OoT... I got the 3DS version and before I even left Kokiri Forest, I lost the game card... I played Majora's Mask and I have to say, I love how you put Kafei ad Anju, as well as Mikau and Lulu together. I loved the story, aside from that one moment when the Goddesses forced Link to do that to Navi... You are an incredible writer, and I never would have expected that twist... And as much as I despise it, it made for an interesting plot at the end, tying in with Majora's Mask.

    P.S. Sorry about blowing up like I had before... I kinda wrote that in a rage...
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  • From ANON - Skeletor on June 20, 2015
    I just finished reading chapter 43 and while it was a great transition into Majora's mask, I reall want to you FUCK YOU. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO LINK AND NAVI!?!?

    ..... I seriously like want to muder you in the most excriciating way possible after that... I mean, HOW DARE YOU... I can't believe you did that to Navi... I am using my old Kindle right now the original one, and I seriously wanted to break it in half when I read the bit with the Goddesses forcing him to tell Navi that he didnt want her... I nearly fucking cried.... Fuck you for doing that... really...



    Okay now that I have my anger out, at least mostly... I loved the reast of the chapter, and I liked how you threw in Kafei and Anju meeting, as well as Mikau and Lulu getting together, those were some nice touches. And I know you probably already got a lot of hate about that happening with Navi but... All I can say is... Can you blame us?
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  • From ANON - quinn on October 18, 2014
    Love the discripsion of Navi. Can You Have a long one about Her?
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  • From Samson on October 08, 2014
    @SpectralTime

    I'm sorry you feel that way, Spectral :( The reason why I made the "ending" sad is because the ending of Ocarina of Time always struck me as depressing, and the idea of keeping continuity with Majora's Mask is something that gets brought up multiple times in the story. In OoT's ending, Navi leaves Link without a word, presumably because she sees no reason to stay with a non-Kokiri after the two of them have completed their quest and saved Hyrule. Link, who either doesn't realize or agree with this, sets off into the Lost Woods in search of her, which leads into the events of Majora's Mask.

    Din, Nayru, and Farore mention more than once during the story that they're concerned they're running out of time with Link, and that they've delayed his trip to Termina for long enough. By breaking Navi's heart, they force the pivotal event leading into Majora's Mask to repeat itself...Navi flees, and Link searches for her in the Lost Woods, bringing him to Termina. I wouldn't call it cheap drama, myself, it's just what the goddesses figured would be the best way to set off that chain of events in that particular moment.

    If nothing else, the fact that this story is pretty old, and was even one of my first ever stories, should give away that it's far from a literary masterpiece :P Again, I'm sorry the experience was soured for you. In the eventually continuation of the storyline, however, Link returns and Navi does make an appearance or two, so they get a chance to talk about what happened. If that makes any difference for you, stay tuned for future chapters!
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  • From ANON - SpectralTime on October 07, 2014
    See, I accidentally read the ending first, and it depressed and confused me. I just don't get why breaking Link and Navi's hearts was so important, and it feels like milking the situation for cheap drama when explaining the problem and solution would have worked just as well.

    The sex is generally okay for a "romp" story, but that ending looms over the whole thing and sours the experience a little for me.
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  • From ANON - the questioner on October 01, 2014
    just wanted to ask if you will add cia or lana from hyrule warriors?
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  • From Harbinger_Of_Kaos on September 23, 2014
    How come Impa hasn't shown up?
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