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Reviews for A new path to power

By : DarthCronos
  • From AlexandraS90 on March 19, 2015
    Not bad so far. The formatting and spelling could use some improvement, and the chapters could stand to be longer/more eventful (especially some erotic content). But you've got the start of a good story here so far.

    If you ever want a hand with formatting/spelling, spitballing ideas, or even a little roleplaying (I'm into Star Wars), just send me an e-mail at theirishapple@gmail.com.
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